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Early Mornings And The Striking Resemblance Of Your Reflection
Remember,
This is only a sketch,
You’ll never embrace perfectly,
Listen closely to the mornings,
hidden beneath the influence
we waited on the sun
You were so scintillating
striding amongst the crown of the king
honey, the horizon is flaring
and it’s in your eyes,
you are imperfect.
by ReverberatingSilence
posted on 09/08/2009
This is only a sketch,
You’ll never embrace perfectly,
Listen closely to the mornings,
hidden beneath the influence
we waited on the sun
You were so scintillating
striding amongst the crown of the king
honey, the horizon is flaring
and it’s in your eyes,
you are imperfect.
by ReverberatingSilence
posted on 09/08/2009
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Comment by grunty: Sep 8, 2009 6:51 pm
Flippin' is right, a wonderful depiction of imperfection.
"striding amongst the crown of the king"
Nice!
Comment by PrettyOdd: Sep 8, 2009 7:51 pm
You were so scintillating
striding amongst the crown of the king
There's something about that... It's just so captivating.
Comment by SilentWords: Sep 9, 2009 8:36 am
Listen closely to the mornings,
hidden beneath the influence
Uh Huh, I just love that, played off my lips with such meaning. Wonderful Job!
Comment by Breakingdown: Sep 9, 2009 9:07 am
CJ????
hmmm...everytime i read these poems of yours i wonder exactly who are you writing them for...cause this just cant be a fantasy it has to be for some one...with the way you can descibe it and everything...
so tell me tell me..
i can keep a secret...hehe
anyways love it...and love you but miss you more....peace love and chicken grease...
*huggies*
*kissies*
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Sep 9, 2009 10:46 am
This is only a sketch
You’ll never embrace perfectly
Ain't that always the way with life.
Burning bridges eh?
*Chucks molotov*
Comment by wingless: Sep 10, 2009 1:10 pm
so beautiful as usual.. hello dear. it tanya and you poetry captivates me as always.. Comment by Telemachus: Sep 10, 2009 3:41 pm
I love this for its sketchiness and how economically it uses words - it is a great demonstration of how little needs to be said to say a lot
I've never known imperfection to be described with such grace and beauty before
This is inspiring
and you did wonderful...