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Each dead leaf

In the apricot bend of the season,
the mummified leaves descend
twirling down and into dead skin cells,
finger nails chewed away by the
feeble bones who chatter in the frosty
world of no universe

dehydrated colors crumble
upon impact,
the wind carries only a few remains
that become lodged in that summer white
of an abandoned web-
the eight legs of a memory
gently wrap the dust of reversed hours
when the seasons were never numbered-
a cycle romancing the deep breath of “Forever”
a lusty concept that will only birth
the reality of our own limits

the sky was never ours
and feet remain grounded

by SilentWords
posted on 06/30/2009

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Comment by PrettyOdd: Jun 30, 2009 1:47 pm
"In the apricot bend of the season"

"the eight legs of a memory
gently wrap the dust of reversed hours"

Stunning. I loved it all, really, but those parts just stood out to me.
I'm PrettyJealous.
Comment by Loveformusicandpoetry1790: Jun 30, 2009 12:29 pm
Much agreed.. and love the caparisons.. curious where you get your inspiration.. Very good..*smiles*
Comment by Telemachus: Jun 30, 2009 9:15 pm
The sky was never ours - that sums up my entire personal philosophy in 5 words! It's a great portrait of decay and obliteration
Comment by Tinkerbellpixie: Jun 30, 2009 11:18 am
I loooved it! For some reason, I have a thing for leaves. They make good metaphors.

a cycle romancing the deep breath of “Forever”
a lusty concept that will only birth
the reality of our own limits

the sky was never ours
and feet remain grounded

This entire poem was brilliant, but these lines are absolutely amazing.
Wonderful write SW!!
Comment by grunty: Jul 6, 2009 9:07 am
Such a beautiful flow to such a melancholy feel.
Amazing Talent You Have!
Comment by Nick1959: Jul 1, 2009 1:23 pm
a cycle romancing the deep breath of “Forever”
a lusty concept that will only birth
the reality of our own limits

this really hits home with me. I seem to always be reaching for forever.

oh how we strive for forever against our own limits and the limits of our partner.

Great work as always

Nick
Comment by Venivik: Jul 1, 2009 4:20 pm
world of no universe
Awesome statement. Just that statement sends my imagination into a frenzy.
Love poems that describe the accuracy of passed time.
Comment by ObiJAh: Jul 2, 2009 12:01 pm
beautiful
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Jul 3, 2009 4:14 am
In the apricot bend of the season

the sky was never ours

Both of those lines made me stop, and read them again.
It just comes naturaly to you doesn't it?...cow...
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