Drowning

Wow. I see you are pretty good after all. I have to keep my eye on you especially for someone only 21 years old?

This is like a peaceful poem...nice flow.
"Other"
fits it just fine

I like the stark impact of the solitary words. A few carefully selected words can sometimessay so much! That is the beauty of poetry - what lies between the lines. Once again, an excellent write.

wow i like it, your poems are all really affective i like the tripling lol loving it

I watched my mom die from pancreatic cancer in a two month span. This poem describes her experience very well. Beautiful!

soft and gentle while still sending a message. great work

I like how its short, meaning is contained, says a lot by the useage of the words. i like it a lot. good job!

this is very unique
because its so short with the meaning so clear
Very well written you have a true talent and u do well with making your poems flow

you do have a talent. great poem.

you write in a simple format the most enigmatic truths..the past only becomes the enemy, if we allow it to remain that way...it,like our judases and thomases are indeed our friends..


harvestoflight

Nice flow
Very good,
you've got talent
keep on writing! =D

really like it

Best poem I've ever read.

this is great

Pretty good!