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Drifting in circles

Suspended in a heart beat,
Between this life and whats next.
Surrounded by an ocean of memories,
I drift alone.

Time means nothing here.

Drifting in circles,
searching the murky depths for direction.
Questions met with questions.
I look to the stars.

Time means nothing there.

Observing the unreachable.
Shining wonder where answers are required.
Drifting in circles,
I close my eyes.

Time...ticks a heart beat

Time means everything.

by kayla
posted on 03/28/2008

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Comment by tobeloved: Mar 28, 2008 7:01 pm
wow.. really good poem. I like it... keep writing.
Comment by loveforeverlivelonger: Mar 28, 2008 9:04 pm
wow this is really good great job!!
Comment by siLeNce16: Mar 28, 2008 9:48 pm
i really like it .. keep writing .. ^-^
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Mar 29, 2008 1:07 am
One of your best! Well done! Voting up! Smiley
Comment by Phantom: Mar 29, 2008 7:53 am
Popularity means nothing, unless it is a good poem!!! This is a wonderfully written poem! It deserves praise!
Comment by losingcontrol: Mar 29, 2008 12:05 pm
great job and keep writing.
Comment by MechanicalAnimal: Mar 30, 2008 11:38 am
Good poem Smiley
Comment by Reeses: Mar 31, 2008 4:37 am
i like this one alot
Comment by missingmom: Mar 31, 2008 5:59 am
Time is a THIEF!
Comment by BrittanyLafoe: Apr 1, 2008 7:45 am
Your really talented to write somthing that beautiful
Comment by Danielleybelley: Apr 2, 2008 7:41 pm
you're really amazing, this is one of my favorites [thus far] Smiley
Comment by livelife: Apr 8, 2008 2:51 pm
incredible, really enjoy your work.
Comment by MsKeys1707: Apr 10, 2008 9:24 am
this is GREAT!!! I love it, very crestive and well written.. I also love the titleSmiley
Keep Writing and Take Care
Comment by footprints: Apr 13, 2008 2:24 am

Your work is really evolving.. as are you in exploring the self as you write. The progression is really noticeable IMO from your first poems - gotta get some of this stuff published! Best wishes. S xx
Comment by Cerberus: Apr 16, 2008 8:10 am
Wonderfully evocative, great stuff. Smiley x
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