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Cry Suicide

Cry suicide
every time the world
doesn’t spin your way.
You deserve to live
forever in the spotlight,
so if you ever start to dim,
be brave.
Cry suicide.

Sugar, I’ll drop my troubles
and come running
each and every time you threaten death.
Should you ever need a shoulder
to boost you into the limelight,
I will cringe and bear your weight.
And if you point fingers
to blame me for the troubles you incur
in passing days,
I will lower my head in shame.

My life I will devote to you.
I have no troubles of my own,
no burdens;
I could never understand your heartache.
When I am not enough to hold you up

cry suicide.

Maybe someone else can come and save you.

by PrettyOdd
posted on 10/26/2009

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Comments: 36
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Comment by flippinthrulife17: Nov 16, 2009 12:17 pm
...I read it carefully o.O I sensed alot of sarcasm O.o...isn't that what was intended?...this is interesting to me...It should open eyes...it's opened mine in a way...
Comment by KAS: Oct 27, 2009 3:18 pm
Great
Comment by pansyxD: Oct 28, 2009 12:24 am
omq,
its great (:
keep up the good work.
Comment by SilentWords: Oct 26, 2009 4:35 pm
I enjoyed this poem, I can not stand the people who "Cry Suicide" when something does not go there way. There are so many people out there whos actual crys get drowned out by these people who crave attention.. it makes me sick.

Another great poem.
Comment by grunty: Oct 26, 2009 5:23 pm
The weak shaln't inherit the Earth.
I really dislike losing, so I never throw the game.(anymore)

I really like this poem Pretty!
The sarcasm is perfect.
Comment by aqua4ever: Oct 26, 2009 5:49 pm
Wow this is amazing, I really love this, it really shows how it is. =D
Vote up.
Comment by xmyxlastxbreathx: Oct 26, 2009 6:25 pm
Love it. Very true. Nice write. Smiley -Votes up-
Comment by darksideofme: Oct 26, 2009 6:57 pm
*Completely Misses the point of the Poem and Proceeds to Bitch at you like a Moron*
Blah blah blah
Bitch Bitch Bitch

Lol

The Sarcasm is so palpable in this.... Its strange you would think anyone could miss the point.

Great Poem.
Comment by loveless: Oct 26, 2009 8:19 pm
wow, i totally understood the point you were getting across. this poem makes me cry everytime i read it. thank you for writing this. this could never be more true then it is now.
Comment by Rokkii: Oct 26, 2009 9:54 pm
OMG!!! God! My ex did that!!! I can't stand it when people do this. There are real people out there who need real help and its often overlooked cuz of losers like him who just have a need for attention. Its sick
Comment by Xenoz: Oct 26, 2009 9:58 pm
Dude, I love this this. So...amazingley satiric. Dripping with sarcasm, and it makes an amazing point! Good write!
Comment by Uncertain: Oct 27, 2009 12:19 am
The sarcasm is palpable, I love it!
To cry suicide when you don't get your way is just a form of emotional blackmail.
Great poem, like always
Comment by darksideofme: Oct 27, 2009 8:47 am
My Girlfriend does this.... All the time.
It pisses me off.
Comment by Elizajh: Oct 27, 2009 11:34 am
yeah this was beyond amazing and heart-achingly true. I feel like this happens on a day to day basis, and I have dealt with this through experience. really nice write.
Comment by poetryismusic: Oct 27, 2009 11:45 am
Yeah I have to agree with everyone here this is a great poem I loved it.
Comment by Writeitout: Oct 27, 2009 12:34 pm
Me love, it works,
Comment by jessroxsox17: Oct 27, 2009 1:56 pm
nice poem
like the sarcasm
makes me happy (:
Comment by DamagedHeart: Oct 27, 2009 5:58 pm
I have also have to agree...its an amazing poem..i loved it!!
Comment by Telemachus: Oct 27, 2009 7:02 pm
I get it - 'nuff said
Comment by Cassandra: Oct 27, 2009 7:17 pm
I love this, I know people who are just like this, always expect me to save them, yet refuse to listen to my problems
Comment by AndThePointIs: Oct 27, 2009 7:55 pm
Great poem (:
Comment by BloodyRainbow: Oct 28, 2009 9:34 am
this is really good.
Comment by camogurl: Oct 28, 2009 10:52 am
dude thats gangster... but it's a rele good poem
Comment by emogothjen: Oct 28, 2009 11:28 am
wow that's really good
Comment by Uncertain: Oct 28, 2009 12:30 pm
I think this should permanently be on the popular list, and should be read every time someone cries suicide
Comment by yummiladiiy: Oct 28, 2009 5:56 pm
This makes me think. I like it.
Comment by Selene: Oct 29, 2009 4:49 pm
looks like you took the words right out of a lot of people's mouths. great work.
Comment by ludivette: Oct 29, 2009 9:59 pm
fantastic Smiley
i'am speechless.
i get what youu mean..
gone-going-went through this.
what an experience.
Comment by SweetTea: Oct 30, 2009 10:30 am
Ha I really hate when people 'Cry suicide" for attention...They act like there is no one else out their that really needs your help....
Great Job!
Love love love the sarcasmSmiley
Comment by binsandpoodles: Oct 31, 2009 5:00 am
great poem understand the meaning and get where you're coming from. keep em comin
Comment by rosesANDletters: Nov 1, 2009 3:59 pm
lovely poem i like it a lot.
good meaning and feeling.
Comment by cupcake: Nov 2, 2009 9:12 am
it makes perfect since.. if you read carefully(:
Comment by mybabysfallenangel: Nov 8, 2009 2:33 pm
great. speaking from past experiences...i know it home with at least a few people...
wonderful job...
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Nov 10, 2009 6:08 pm
*Cookie*

*Another cookie*

*Throws the fucking box*
Comment by Tinkerbellpixie: Nov 15, 2009 7:21 pm
Reading my mind.
Comment by AdamSaylor: Nov 20, 2009 7:43 am
Love it. It's got a somewhat similar message to a poem that I wrote. I just wish I could find it so I could upload it. >_>
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