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cosmology

In a flash
of boastful spark
I realize

that stars
are just fireworks
not coming back

although

look over their shoulders
at us
to laugh.


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In a flash
of boastful spark
I realize that stars
are just fireworks that ain't coming back
but look over their shoulders
at us
to laugh.


by google
posted on 09/03/2008

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Comment by mysterygrl: Sep 4, 2008 11:40 am
Wow love the poem!! Its short and sweet!
Comment by FavoriteTheMute: Sep 5, 2008 6:58 pm
I like the title. Offsetting a bit. I like the breakdown of the poem the setup. I really like

In a flash
of boastful spark

Good stuff.
Comment by chiroptera: Sep 6, 2008 9:35 pm
cool mental image of stars being like a frozen explosion
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