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Come on Boy

Your words seduce my mind
Your hands ignite my skin
Your lips make me wet
I want you deep within

Now kiss me down there
Move your tongue around
Slide your fingers in me
ohh lick it up and down

Your body on top of mine
Your arms hold me tight
Your body thrusting in me
Makes me explode all night

by gabriella
posted on 10/01/2008

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Comments: 17
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Comment by angeliclove: Oct 1, 2008 2:31 pm
I know what you mean. I love it
Comment by mysterygrl: Oct 1, 2008 2:58 pm
Nice!!
Comment by xXxMayxXx: Oct 1, 2008 6:16 pm
Aw man its really descriptive x3 love teh second stanza. especailly the part where it says "move your tongue around
slide your fingers in me
ohh lick it up and down" x333
The rhymings great too =o
Comment by DeafJimmy: Oct 1, 2008 6:24 pm
so, sex poems are all the rage now?
Comment by darkprincess: Oct 1, 2008 6:55 pm
Ohhhh I love this one. It really got to me
Comment by southerncomfort: Oct 2, 2008 7:15 am
very touching haha. I really like it.
Comment by Atwood: Oct 2, 2008 9:55 am
keep this out of here thanks oO
Comment by Lonelygirl: Oct 2, 2008 9:40 pm
Very good stuff...love it
Comment by sanssoul: Oct 3, 2008 8:14 pm
yes I like it
Comment by poetmeme: Oct 16, 2008 2:32 am
really mysterious in a romantic kind of way... I like it!
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Nov 26, 2008 6:51 pm
Shut up BS! You may be right but to me it is still EEEEWWWW! No offence...I'm just not into the whole....you know?
Comment by Vampiressofmoonlight1: Nov 26, 2008 6:24 pm
good
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Nov 26, 2008 11:10 am
I'm sorry but EEEEEWWWWWWW!!!
Now that that's out of my system...Good poem.
Comment by BloodLustingElf: Nov 26, 2008 11:17 am
Ha Ha. Ls, tis a fact of life. Very good poem and don't mind my sister, she is just weird.
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Nov 26, 2008 11:20 am
I am not weird!!
I said it was a good poem...I just think it's eeewwww, you know?
Comment by fade: Nov 26, 2008 11:21 am
Well okay then. Very...provocative. Haha. Good poem. Evokes quite a feeling, and good sensory detail...well, yea.
Comment by BloodLustingElf: Nov 26, 2008 3:22 pm
no ls i don't know, i don't see what is wrong with a very intimate poem, it only describes some of the deepest darkest desires in every heart.
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