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Body

Vibrations through the heart.
Pulsating,
flickering,
buzzing,
blood runs through my veins.

You better believe this was right;
because from what I can tell,
we weren't facing left.
You explored the rhythms that go with the curves.

So when you catch yourself reminiscing
Remember to pretend this didn't happen.



Cue the drama.

by thefadingscene
posted on 04/12/2008

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Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Apr 12, 2008 8:50 pm
THAT is something different! I love the second verse. The whole poems awesome!

Well done. Voting up. Smiley
Comment by google: Apr 12, 2008 10:17 pm

good poem.

nice to see free verse.

Comment by tearsofrain: Apr 13, 2008 6:10 am
HA
perfect.
that is perfect.
in a good way too.
i'm a little...
disoriented. but.
i think this may even be one of my favorites of all your poems
Comment by thefadingscene: Apr 13, 2008 6:52 am
haha thanks.
Comment by Waterblaze3234: Apr 13, 2008 10:12 am
that was awesome! lol i loved it!
Comment by Atwood: Apr 13, 2008 1:39 pm
"So when you catch yourself reminiscing
Remember to pretend this didn't happen."

Yes.
You write in a way where you've got mystery about you and I rather like it. you write just enough to get it across and then you sort of pull it back in.
reminds me a lot of the book i just read.
you is talented.
except at comebacks ;D
Comment by MechanicalAnimal: Apr 13, 2008 1:43 pm
I don't get it although I wish I did because I think it's fucking awesome!!!
Comment by TheDarkShadow: Apr 13, 2008 2:06 pm
fabulous
Comment by BeccaV: Apr 14, 2008 6:00 am
It's awesome!!
Comment by AngelIndeed: Apr 14, 2008 11:18 am
Wonderful!
Comment by anonymous: Apr 14, 2008 7:00 pm
wow it's really good.
Comment by KingOfTwilight: Apr 23, 2008 10:56 am
very original. keep writing
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