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at this moment

i want everthing to stop for a fricken second
so that i can catch up with it
im being left behind with nothing to hold on to
trying to figure out what im suppose to do
harsh words flying from ever corner
while im falling into this sadness even farther and farther
reaching out for help
gasping for a breath of air
but nobody can hear me yell
im getting the feeling nobody ever cared

by brockendreams
posted on 02/15/2008

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Comment by Poison: Feb 15, 2008 9:28 am
Very good.
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Feb 15, 2008 9:42 am
great poem i feel like that too.
Comment by babyboogt82886: Feb 15, 2008 11:12 am
I FEEL THAT WAY AS WELL! GOOD POEM!
Comment by oceanreverie: Feb 16, 2008 10:28 pm
story of my life. great job at writting, you described the feeling perfectly. keep it up
Comment by Elizzybeth86: Feb 20, 2008 9:20 am
great poem.
Comment by sajinn: Feb 20, 2008 7:50 pm
omg thats deep......read my poem called a smile when im drowning....i think u can relate to it^^
Comment by tobeloved: Mar 6, 2008 2:56 pm
great poem
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