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Absence

Your reflection is in all the windows on main street
The hoboes at Central whisper your name
Priests shudder to recall your deeds
St John rattles the windows
But you do not answer

Fourteen is the new twelve
The highway narrows at the border
Graduation day is over
St John wants your number
But you do not answer

Those you spurned drive burned out cars
They seek peace in the sea
Ambition is the new blue
St John begs for mercy
But you do not answer

I am riding through the night on my Cliché 650
Absolution is on my tail
I am blinded by the light
St John steps in front of me
And I see your face at last

by Telemachus
posted on 11/05/2009

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Comment by mcmil: Nov 7, 2009 4:03 am
speachless
Comment by charlotte897: Nov 19, 2009 5:21 am
i like it its very good
Comment by chiwa: Nov 9, 2009 7:31 am
Very interesting. Made me think.
Comment by meltedsnowman: Nov 5, 2009 5:39 pm
*shivers* that was incredible
Comment by mybeloved: Nov 5, 2009 6:34 pm
wow.
Comment by grunty: Nov 5, 2009 7:23 pm
Tele...because this is coming for you...I shall have to ponder on it for awhile longer.

This is some very good work!

Votes up!
Comment by BlackbookPast: Nov 5, 2009 8:39 pm
that was amazing....
Comment by SilentWords: Nov 6, 2009 9:15 am
The whole first stanza was beauty in its finest form. Really shuttered my core. This is brilliant.. but you are brilliant.. so why am I so surprised?

I can just feel, that a lot of thought went into this, stunning.. I shall vote up as well!
Comment by Selene: Nov 6, 2009 10:41 am
chilling yet beautiful. I know this poem shall be on my mind for a good few hours.
Comment by fanpirewerevocate: Nov 6, 2009 4:38 pm
Wow. Just wow.
Comment by google: Nov 7, 2009 8:55 am

great ride, thanks
Comment by loveaspasticheart: Nov 7, 2009 9:22 pm
wow, that was absolutely amazing.
Comment by ReverberatingSilence: Nov 8, 2009 7:16 pm
Interesting poem...
Comment by ForbiddenLove: Nov 8, 2009 3:23 pm
THis was very good your skill is amazing
Comment by beautifuldisaster: Nov 9, 2009 10:23 am
I am riding through the night on my Cliché 650
Absolution is on my tail

Good god tele, your writing never ceases to amaze and stupify me!
I shall go away and hide until I can write as well as you... *grumble*
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