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About Face

Maybe
this was all wrong
we went charging into somewhere
we didn't belong

Maybe
we weren't meant to be
jumping head first into
a war we couldn't see

Maybe
We should turn our seperate ways
lose ourselves
in warm summer days

Maybe
If this is over soon
I'll be over you
by the end of next June

Maybe
I'm just overthinking things
I'll just run away
If only I could spread these wings...

by asdfyz
posted on 06/30/2008

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Comment by ashuhhland: Jun 30, 2008 9:34 pm
really great
Comment by jacobc: Jul 1, 2008 10:10 am
I love the ending.
Comment by timewornsoul: Jun 30, 2008 5:28 pm
Brilliant!!! It talks about something thats going on in the world today. Great job.
Comment by PrettyOdd: Jul 1, 2008 7:11 pm
Ahh!! I love it. Amazing.
Comment by greybutterfly: Jul 1, 2008 7:07 pm
good job
Comment by FadingAway: Jul 1, 2008 4:37 pm
I love itt.
=]
Comment by oceanreverie: Jul 1, 2008 1:26 pm
this is really good. i like the ending, the last line just kind of hits you. its a bit provoking..
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