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A Poet’s journey

the full moon looked famished
on this night of autumn lust

the mountains, less provoking;
almost eclipsed,
under the marble veil that
quilted a picture of our Author, masking
it’s own beauty

the seedy white vapor
claimed us all
but our eyes still talked of stars
and our lips,
of silence

we could still find poetry,
our pens still bleed the black
of our moon-sick fibers

we would die,
like the lilies
when the tart breeze
would not bend

but our death,
was never stone deep

we would always rise-
webbing our way
through somber textures

with one eye open,
to a breach of a
lighter dusk

by SilentWords
posted on 11/04/2009

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Comments: 13
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Comment by Tinkerbellpixie: Nov 15, 2009 6:42 pm
"the full moon looked famished
on this night of autumn lust

we would die,
like the lilies
when the tart breeze
would not bend"

Absolutely beautiful! Magnificent!
Wow. Your work continues to stun me. Why? I don't know. You'd think I would be used to it by now.
Wonderful write! I am definitely voting up, no doubt.
Comment by beautifuldisaster: Nov 9, 2009 12:52 pm
but our eyes still talked of stars
and our lips,
of silence

I really like this! Brilliant poem as usual silent!
Voting up
Comment by grunty: Nov 4, 2009 2:39 pm
Damn, you never cease to amaze me.

"we would always rise-
webbing our way
through somber textures"

It was hard to choose any one set of lines to quote, they are all so good and they fit so well together...but I really do like these.

You are a true poet!
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Nov 4, 2009 2:44 pm
*shivers*
whoa...this gave me chills. *smiles* I smiled in awe through this, the imagery is breathtaking, along with the mixture of your metaphors-which always equal up to perfection...am I making sense?
you're an amazing poet Smiley
Comment by fanpirewerevocate: Nov 4, 2009 5:54 pm
*blink, blink*
I agree....
Comment by Telemachus: Nov 5, 2009 2:54 pm
Is grunty's volcano on the horizon somewhere?

I know I have said this before but I love your use of landscapes to concretise your thoughts and feelings.

Do you paint?
Comment by PrettyOdd: Nov 6, 2009 7:43 pm
"but our eyes still talked of stars
and our lips,
of silence

we could still find poetry,
our pens still bleed the black
of our moon-sick fibers"

Crap that's good. I mean, really good. I have to vote this up. It's just.. beautiful.
Comment by ObiJAh: Nov 8, 2009 10:57 am
we would die,
like the lilies
when the tart breeze
would not bend

but our death,
was never stone deep

that's really really cool
awesome poem
Comment by Nick1959: Nov 9, 2009 5:59 pm
the full moon looked famished
on this night of autumn lust

I love this line, how many times has that moon looked famished for lack of feeding.

the whole poem is amazing great symbolism and depth. once again you paint with the practiced stroke of the master.

Great poem

Nick
Comment by Atavist: Nov 17, 2009 6:26 pm
Publish or perish.The world spins upon the axis of words such as these.I am amzed at the complete depth and maturity of such a complete use of language and words, to fill the spaces with even more meaning than the whole of the prose itself.imagery that leaves an imprint when you close your eyes.
Comment by Shadow17: Nov 18, 2009 3:42 am
This is once again a wonderful poem! Truly you are remarkable with word choice and order. Not just that, the structure and the imagery and well, the entire purpose of the poem is just wonderfully executed! Great job!
Comment by AdamSaylor: Nov 20, 2009 7:56 am
I can't tell you just how much I appreciate this poem. To me, this is more than a poem; it's a call to action, as if this poem were our anthem. I've been writing poetry for many years, and my faith in writing has been weakening year by year, but this poem gives me hope in literature.
Comment by JeNvEy: Nov 21, 2009 1:38 am
wow your very talented, ive red a few of yuor peoms not all 200 lol but the ones ive have seen a awesome
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