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A Diamond

If I don't look, how can I see,
all the potential I have in me.
So fuelled with complaints.
Life's so unfair.
I miss all the magic that's really there.

A diamond.
buried by fear.
Under layers of time,
becoming less clear.
Still shining.
Fragments of light in the dark.
Optimistic,
one day the layers will fall apart.

A treasure to discover.
If I bother to look,
further than the pages of my...
'Story' book.
Eyes judge externally and rarely look inside.
Behind layers of denial is where I tend to hide,
shining away.
But no ones allowed to see.
Hidden away, even from me.
A diamond.

by kayla
posted on 05/04/2008

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Comment by PoemWritingGuy: May 6, 2008 5:35 am
Very good poem, Kayla. Smiley
Comment by crimsonshadow: May 5, 2008 9:04 pm
wow real nice
Comment by JNYCE: May 6, 2008 6:27 pm
your really good
Comment by SPAGACKULA: May 5, 2008 3:37 am
Your Awesome work of masterpieces proves otherwise.
Your Excellent work shows what cannot be seen ,your words are pleasing to the senses.
Thumbs Up!
Comment by MechanicalAnimal: May 4, 2008 2:04 pm
I translate this poem as being about the fact that although life is hard and we just feel like giving up, there's always something there that keeps us from just giving up (well, in most people's cases anyway), and we just have to look on the bright side of life so to speak and do something about the bad things... if that's what it is well, I agree with the first half but not the second.
Comment by MechanicalAnimal: May 4, 2008 1:51 pm
Cool.
Comment by Darryn732: May 4, 2008 12:48 pm
Good poem - I like it as always Smiley
Comment by lifesucks: May 7, 2008 10:21 am
great poem
Comment by simon: May 8, 2008 3:12 am
great poem, brilliant metaphor.
Comment by mysterygrl: May 8, 2008 1:27 pm
wow this is really good!
Comment by TheDesired: May 8, 2008 5:58 pm
Good! I love it!
Comment by livelife: May 9, 2008 5:46 pm
Such a great poem Kayla. I enjoyed it very much...
Comment by zoe: May 10, 2008 6:06 pm
great Poem.....LOVE IT!
Comment by asdfyz: May 13, 2008 6:37 am
cool poem. I know someone who is jsut like that. So beautiful and amazing but they just don't see it.
Comment by LoOnEyBeAr: May 14, 2008 10:12 am
I like it
Comment by AngelicallyBroken: May 18, 2008 1:41 pm
very good kayla...love your work!
Comment by Jenifer5: May 23, 2008 11:45 am
Love it!
Comment by Greyhoundfb: May 23, 2009 10:37 pm
great poetry.
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