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Five o'clock in the morning,
such a long day ahead.
previous night flashed by
can't remember what was said.

I rub my bloodshot eyes
to wake to nothing but the room.
there is nothing here
nothing can dwell near
me because everything I've done
is sleep without Z's
long hours lying awake at night
staring at the ceiling
watching it drip upon me.
It weighs me down
and crushes me.

I cry out loud,
but no one hears it
I am alone in a sea of nothing

by TheDarkShadow
posted on 07/13/2009

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Comment by SilentStorm: Jul 13, 2009 8:50 am
yea i dnt know wat it means but lol i still find it absorbing
Comment by tearsofrain: Jul 16, 2009 5:44 pm
i don't think you give yourself enough credit.
i'm sure this means something x}

"long hours lying awake at night
staring at the ceiling
watching it drip upon me."

favorite lines.
Comment by LoveMeDead: Sep 8, 2009 7:12 am
This is really good. I couldn't stop reading it.
Comment by SisterofDarkness: Sep 18, 2009 9:43 pm
wow.first off. just wow.
and i agree w/ jessi. i'm sure this means something.

i really like the last stanza.
like a lot.

"I cry out loud,
but no one hears it
I am alone in a sea of nothing"

idk why but those lines just really stand out to me.
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