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~-And Then Suddenly-~

It hasn't felt like the room has stopped spinning yet.
I'm in a state of vertigo, trying to control my gag reflex.
I'm not sure what to regret or what to just forget,
but each move I make is no more stable than the next.
My eyes can't focus on just one thing,
my mind won't stop rocking, twisting and turning.
I'm damn near oblivious to what all of this may bring,
and the fire may be dying but I can't stop the burning.

and then suddenly-
suddenly-
Everything begins to slow down...
a smile finds my lips, reaches and brightens my eyes.
and then suddenly-
suddenly-
Everything begins to carefully turn around,
my hand slipped perfectly
right into yours, to my sweet surprise.

Suddenly, yet so timelessly,
you smile for me...
your words soothe my nerves, as my thoughts ponder,
your heart reaching for mine

and now Suddenly-
I want to see, why you make me happy-
Happier than I deserve to be
and I can only wonder,
Where have you been all of this time?

by flippinthrulife17
posted on 11/06/2009

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Comment by trailseekr: Nov 9, 2009 12:49 pm
Beautiful. There's nothing quite like the warmth of a smile.
Comment by Shadow17: Nov 16, 2009 1:38 pm
Very cute, and I will align with Nick. Wonderful write!
Comment by courtneytland: Nov 6, 2009 8:13 am
i love this this was really really good
Comment by darknessofcrows: Nov 6, 2009 9:13 am
*smiles possibly the biggest smile ever*
This is beautiful, Ducie, thank you.
I'm almost speechless.
Lovely.
Comment by Loveformusicandpoetry1790: Nov 6, 2009 9:21 am
Aw, this is soo beautiful, very nice work Hun it a very cute poem.. kinda think that this poem should remind my girlfriend of me..lol.. anyways very nice work..keep it up*smiles*
Comment by itsme0405: Nov 6, 2009 9:29 am
great poem! i really enjoyed it. my favorite line: "the fire may be dying but i cant stop the burning."
nice work.
Comment by kiraralee77: Nov 6, 2009 10:39 am
amazing.
what else can be said about such a brilliant poem.
Comment by james1989: Nov 6, 2009 10:50 am
really good poem i love it.
Comment by ordinarycanary: Nov 6, 2009 1:50 pm
Aww. This is so beautifuuuul. And it was sudden, like all of a sudden you really weren't dizzy and it all became clear. Great poem! Open smile
Comment by Healer: Nov 6, 2009 2:23 pm
lucky guy,
Comment by BlackbookPast: Nov 6, 2009 3:35 pm
the best things in life will come at the worst of times...when you need them the most
Comment by true: Nov 7, 2009 6:57 am
i was looking for some poem............. and suddenly i found this one...... suddenly i loved it.... suddenly i felt that i should comment..... what a great sudden!!!!
Comment by mybeloved: Nov 7, 2009 9:47 am
this is really good, i love it.
Comment by pastorey: Nov 7, 2009 1:23 pm
yeah this sounds good could quite easily be some song lyrics i think
Comment by Acheron: Nov 7, 2009 5:23 pm
NAWWWWWWWW SOO TUTE!!!!
LOVES IT BUNCHES
Comment by prettyspl: Nov 7, 2009 6:00 pm
Shivers .. of joy and memories. Thank you so much for sharing this sweetness with the rest of us! Amazing emotional release .. Life is good! : )
Comment by hutwohl58: Nov 7, 2009 7:33 pm
"The fire may be dying but I cant stop the burning" Thats brilliant can i steal it LOL. I like the poem.Im happy youre in love Ill be back.Hut
Comment by meltedsnowman: Nov 8, 2009 12:01 am
just incredible- i fele that way with my bf..
Comment by magpie333: Nov 9, 2009 3:26 pm
that's an amazing poem! (:
Comment by Nick1959: Nov 9, 2009 6:17 pm
Very good, lots of emotion, both lovely and sad, very good ending. you have grown in your writing more than I would have guessed. but I should not be surprised as you have natural talent.

Great write

POPS
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