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Your as beautiful as a rose

When I look at a fully bloomed rose
it reminds me of your beautiful smile
your soft red lips reminds me of a silky
peddles of a rose , you’re as sharp
as a thorn on the stem of a rose
your sweet sent drives me wild
like a honey bee craves nectar from
the center of the rose , the curve from
the top of the rose to the stem reminds me
Of your sexy curves .when a gentle
breeze blows upon the rose it sways
side to side like your sexy walk
the roots is very strong like my love for you .
You can tell how strong a rose is by the stem meets
Top of the rose by how thick it is the stronger the
Stem the stronger the rose, just like when our heart
Beats together at the same time and feels strong .
They say a strong rose last 7days when it's cut
From its stem , but our love will last forever.

by italjob2
posted on 08/06/2009

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Comment by chaos128: Aug 6, 2009 1:12 pm
Your poem is very expressive but you disrepect your own work by being careless with the spelling. Take a little more time to get it right.
Comment by italjob2: Aug 6, 2009 4:02 pm
thanx
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