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Young and Foolish

Once in a life time a girl falls for a guy right
sometimes it doesnt go well fight after fight
they make up and break up tear after tear
they been together for so long why stop here
she gets pregnant he leaves her all on her own
thru the strenght and struggles a strong girl shown
she met a new guy and he willing to be with her
raising a kid that aint his showing he's for sure
been goin steady for a while now they plan to marry
falling in love all over again getting kinda scary

everyone been sayin she young and foolish
but yall she aint too young to do this
they cant take her away from him
not the one helping her love again
everyone sayin she gonna get herself hurt
but yall the chances she takes are full of worth
they cant take her away from the world
not the things helping her raise her lil girl
everyone sayin she just cant be ready
but yall it has been 3 yrs and steady

the girl is happy more than she has ever been
dont put her down and tell her she cant love again
So why can't you people just leave her alone
with a daughter of 8 now she's already grown
grown enough to make her own choices now
the boy has helped her from being down
if love has come by the second time and she's still here
let her be happy and face her own fear
Is it you think you know more than they can
If he loves her, and she loves him, then why trouble them

everyone been sayin she young and foolish
but yall she aint too young to do this
they cant take her away from him
not the one helping her love again
everyone sayin she gonna get herself hurt
but yall the chances she takes are full of worth
they cant take her away from the world
not the things helping her raise her lil girl
everyone sayin she just cant be ready
but yall it has been 13 yrs and steady

the girl is grown now and they sat her down
tears in their eyes, but the time is now
they tell her he's not her father at birth
but he was the guy who held her first
without hesitation she said I LOVE YOU STILL
you raised me since i was a little girl
we may not be blood but you are my daddy
you helped mommy since the day she had me
i love you dad with all of my heart dont forget it
cuz my feelings for you wont change, not a bit

everyone been sayin she young and foolish
but yall she aint too young to do this
they cant take her away from him
not the one helping her love again
everyone sayin she gonna get herself hurt
but yall the chances she takes are full of worth
they cant take her away from the world
not the things helping her raise her lil girl
everyone sayin she just cant be ready
but yall it has been so many years and they still goin steady

by LittleNikki
posted on 12/17/2008

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Comment by friendZdogZ: Dec 17, 2008 3:00 pm
aww this is real sweet. i love the part where the kid says i lou you still evenhough your not blood. very very sweet.
great job
Comment by Haylo: Dec 17, 2008 5:59 pm
OMG. This is so heartfelt and sweet. u have tremendous talent. You really captured the soul u were going for. That was absoultely amazing. i love how u put it together. Keep writing!
Comment by BradfordAmatoJr: Dec 18, 2008 9:18 am
Amazing! I love how it seems you could keep goin with it this is def. a good poem!
Comment by watsmyproblem: Jan 5, 2009 3:32 pm
its a brilliant poem amazing
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