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You're the One..(Song)

great times I've had with you
many more to come
fan blowing air
through your dark brown hair

you're the one on my mind
you're the one on my soul
you're the only one I think about

moonlight shines through your eyes
as your beautiful smile lights up the skies
shining through like a candle in a dark room
as you sit emotionless with whom

you may be quiet
you may be shy
but that makes me love you so

I know you don't like to dance
but I'd like this one chance
to sway under the moonlight
with you

you don't feel the groove
you don't feel the beat
of the music that makes me tap my feet

I never got the time
I never got the chance
to ask you a question
that's laid heavy upon my chest

been thinkin of how to ask
since my last plan failed
but finally found
the idea with the right sound

I now found the time
I now got the chance
so now that this song
has broken the ice
I releave my chest
of this heavy purden of a quest

Will you go out with me?

by funkyninja898
posted on 10/01/2008

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Comment by cutiepie: Oct 3, 2008 12:42 pm
i agree withe darksideofme i hope it works our with u.
Comment by AshenNight: Oct 12, 2008 8:25 pm
Tsk tsk.
Kid!
"Releave"?
Ahahah.
No.
Relieve**
*sigh*
But what's-her-face....Stacie, better have said yes, which btw did she?
Comment by eclipse9407: Oct 13, 2008 4:11 pm
I'm sorry it didnt work out for you. I would say somthing but it'd probably be mean. I'm always here for you luv you lots bro Smiley
Comment by darksideofme: Oct 1, 2008 6:03 pm
Nice......
"you may be quiet
you may be shy
but that makes me love you so"

In my opinion shy girls are the cutest.
Hope that works out for you man.
Comment by Firefury87: Oct 2, 2008 12:47 pm
If this girl still refuse to go out with you, then she really is not interested, but reading this poem should make her shiver and at least give you that one chance... Nice way to ask a girl to go out with you, really unique Smiley I like it!
Comment by pixy4eva2005: Oct 2, 2008 4:09 pm
love it thinks its great if that dont work i dont know what will lol
Comment by smokey: Nov 5, 2008 3:20 pm
i am so jelous i wish i had your talent
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