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Wishing On Every Eyelash

I've been wishing on every eyelash that I can find baby
That you'll stay with me when I get back somehow maybe
Please don't break my heart
Just don't tear me apart

Why can't this last forever
We're always so happy together

I'm missin' you so bad I can feel you in my arms cutie
Dreamin' of your bright eyes and all your dazzling beauty
You're so radiant and luscious
I still feel your soft touches

Why can't this last forever
We're always so happy together

I can't wait to be with you, at night you're all that I can see
So affectionate and lovely the way heaven meant you to be
We're through the homestretch door
Soon you'll be mine forevermore

Why can't this last forever
We're always so happy together
Just tell me who says we can't
And we'll prove them wrong

by Iggy
posted on 07/01/2009

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Comment by EhWell: Jul 11, 2009 12:18 am
I really like it, I like the repetition you used. The first quatrain felt a little doctor suessy with the rhymes, but really that's my only gripe, and it's awfully hard to avoid. After that though the flow was beautiful and just felt right.

I very much like this poem!
~John
Comment by gelid: Jul 1, 2009 4:43 am
i love the flow in this poem its soft, and the wording is gorgeous. excelent work, and i've that same feeling before
Comment by Venivik: Jul 1, 2009 8:40 am
I came here to say exactly what gelid did, the flow is completely fantastic.
Comment by KAS: Jul 2, 2009 2:05 pm
Flow and emotion. awesome
Comment by jjxx1992: Jul 2, 2009 2:36 pm
OMFG I love it!!!! It's the most romantic poem you've ever written. I miss you so much baby and I want to be with you forever as well.
Comment by xxxpainxxx: Jul 8, 2009 8:41 pm
Wow, I love it. So affectionite, and it gets to the point!
Comment by lexxie2323: Aug 6, 2009 12:45 am
aww thats cute and no spelling mistakes damn cant return the favour smart ass
Comment by GothicRomance: Aug 16, 2009 2:08 pm
what a cute poem :]
I love the way it flows.
keep up the good work!
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