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Will You Remember Me?

If you can sit by me
meeting for the first time
staring at the sea
and pass me your love
will you remember me?

If you can stand by me
and get married together
recalling the sea
as I share your love
will you remember me?

If you can lay by me
dying of cancer in your bed
wanting to be back at the sea
cutting your love away, asking
Will you remember me?

If I sit by myself
back where we met
staring at the sea
feeling your love again
I remember you

by darksideofme
posted on 09/09/2008

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Comment by Freewriter91: Oct 8, 2008 10:27 am
Thats beautiful Mike oh my gosh.. You have such an amazing talent
Comment by cutiepie: Sep 29, 2008 10:18 am
i love this poem one of the best so far.
Comment by mshicks: Sep 10, 2008 11:44 am
Love is something so special that only actions can express and I feel you did wonderfully in this poem
Comment by ashuhhland: Sep 10, 2008 2:30 pm
aww. its so good. i love it
Comment by brokenXbruisedXbleeding: Sep 11, 2008 12:18 am
i really dont know how to deacribe it i liked it but describing it there aint no words for it.
Comment by crystina8503: Sep 11, 2008 10:15 am
I love it.
Comment by fade: Sep 11, 2008 8:14 pm
Oh my gosh.
I'm speechless.
This is wonderful.

The repitition worked well and set the mood strongly. This is a truly beautiful poem.
Comment by Babigurlbroken: Sep 17, 2008 5:34 am
Beautiful..... thats the only word that fits.... ur an amazing writer... I like how it gives you an image
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