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Will the Rain Stop

As I look through this rain covered window
At the storm raging in the sky
Softly in my head
My true love's voice tells me goodbye

This morning we talked for hours
As the tears streamed down my face
A fight, a disagreement, a misunderstanding
If only that was the case

For our love for each other is strong
And each day continues to grow
Forbidden from being together
For reasons we both know

Each day when there is beauty
Created by the setting sun
Our thoughts will be of each other
And our hearts will become one

As I watch the rain continue to fall
And long for my best friend
I pledge to you, my sweetheart
A love that will never end

by hopesinthebox
posted on 09/05/2008

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Comment by cutiepie: Oct 3, 2008 12:38 pm
so sweet i'm crying right now.
Comment by aarniyash: Sep 7, 2008 4:05 am
Hey beautiful poem!
Comment by sneha: Dec 23, 2008 1:35 am
ITS A BRILLIANT WAY TO EXPRESS THE PAIN N THE PLEASURE OF BEING IN LOVE....
WONDERFUL........
Comment by FadingAway: Oct 12, 2008 7:12 pm
Wowers.
I love it. =]
Comment by lovegoddess: Sep 24, 2008 4:09 am
Wow this is amazing. Your Love is so powerful. Wish I could find some one who I love that much.
Comment by Selene: Sep 6, 2008 4:12 am
this is a beautiful poem.
Comment by Brandon: Sep 6, 2008 1:14 pm
I can feel the strenghth of your love
Comment by AshFallsSlow: Sep 8, 2008 12:06 am
oh that is so powerfull.

especially the last line.

good work
Comment by findmeinvisible: Sep 8, 2008 1:25 pm
love this one
Comment by PrettyOdd: Sep 8, 2008 1:57 pm
This is such a sweet poem. It really is beautiful. You put a lot of emotion in it. Great job.
Comment by watever76: Sep 8, 2008 2:53 pm
great poem Smiley
Comment by Tin22: Sep 8, 2008 5:30 pm
was the reason too small? So it felt bad? I wonder...
Comment by wyldegirl: Sep 9, 2008 2:28 am
awesome
Comment by Chloe: Sep 12, 2008 7:11 am
This is such a beautiful poem. I am so touched . Thank you for sharing
Comment by Breannalove: Sep 12, 2008 2:34 pm
I love this poem. It is so beautiful. True love.
Comment by gabriella: Sep 12, 2008 4:20 pm
Very good poem
Comment by sweetbloodyangel: Sep 15, 2008 9:29 am
i love this poem....i read over and over...and im still wanting to read it...so great job!
Comment by angeliclove: Sep 16, 2008 7:41 am
This is so beautiful. I wish I could find this kind of love. I am here for you if you ever need to talk. ;)
Comment by Sarahsmile: Sep 16, 2008 1:23 pm
This is such a sweet poem. It really touches my heart
Comment by darklove: Sep 18, 2008 1:39 pm
Beautiful poem, I love this one
Comment by burningheart: Sep 19, 2008 2:29 pm
Beautiful, very touching
Comment by southerncomfort: Sep 22, 2008 7:20 pm
Incredible... such a beautiful poem
Comment by hollygirl: Sep 23, 2008 9:26 pm
Great work.. I love it
Comment by lovegoddess: Sep 24, 2008 4:10 am
Now I'm gonna afta break up w/ my boyfriend cuz that's not true luv like this is.(;
Comment by iwashungrywhileiwasdead: Sep 24, 2008 7:15 am
i absolutely love this poem ..its amazing !!

Great work
Comment by findmeinvisible: Sep 24, 2008 12:46 pm
oh my god this is awesome.
Comment by tearsofpain: Sep 25, 2008 3:57 pm
THis is so beautiful. modern day Romeo and Juliet
Comment by blackheart: Sep 25, 2008 4:11 pm
I love this story of true love
Comment by Denise: Sep 29, 2008 9:21 am
aww this was a cute poem..keep on writing
Comment by asdfyz: Sep 27, 2008 4:46 pm
this one is so sweet. Love at its finest. I wish the best for you and your loved one, because i feel the same way about osmeone and I would never want ti to end.
Comment by echodelta112: Sep 28, 2008 7:54 am
amazing
Comment by mytragedy: Sep 29, 2008 10:42 pm
I hope you two the best.. This is very touching
Comment by Villager: Oct 3, 2008 8:14 am
I really enjoyed it. beautiful work
Comment by heartlesslover: Oct 6, 2008 4:17 pm
Lovely, very touching
Comment by lostangel: Oct 8, 2008 7:07 am
Beautiful
Comment by Ambzie: Oct 8, 2008 9:26 am
great






didnt even read it.
Comment by xDagex: Oct 8, 2008 12:19 pm
I love this!
Comment by dead2you55: Oct 11, 2008 4:08 pm
GREAT
Comment by friendZdogZ: Oct 16, 2008 9:09 am
awww that's so sweet
this poem is truly amazing
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Oct 16, 2008 10:34 am
Great poem.
Comment by TearsofAcid: Oct 19, 2008 8:19 pm
Great work...True love
Comment by Bribri210: Nov 2, 2008 2:33 pm
OMg ur are amazing
get poem!!!!
kepp up the gd work =]
Comment by WaveBandit: Nov 8, 2008 6:21 pm
I feel you
Comment by gothinlove: Nov 10, 2008 6:30 pm
Lovely poem, I love it Smiley
Comment by christi823: Nov 24, 2008 7:53 pm
This nearly brought me to tears, actually.

Beautiful!!
[:
Comment by BradfordAmatoJr: Dec 16, 2008 8:12 pm
The Best poem ive read on this site so far !!!
Comment by alysiarulz: Apr 8, 2009 7:01 pm
JUST BEAUTIUFLL
Comment by bluzzfan: Jun 18, 2009 6:35 pm
I loved this poem.
Comment by poetansxD: Aug 29, 2009 7:52 pm
very goodSmiley
keep up the good work:]
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