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When

When I don’t have you apart of me, I feel pain.
When I see you depressed it brings tears to my eyes.
When you cry I want to cry with you.
When I make a mistake I want to make it up to you.
When I do something wrong I want to scream to I LOVE YOU.
When I first lead eyes on you I knew my heart was yours.
When you first said I LOVE YOU I knew I wanted to spend the rest of my life with you.

by bow16
posted on 03/31/2008

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Comment by MsKeys1707: Mar 31, 2008 11:15 am
this is a good poem but it has a few grammatical errors
Keep writing and take careSmiley
Comment by gothchik13: Mar 31, 2008 3:47 pm
wow that is a great poem, even though it has errors. it was awesome!
Comment by gothchik13: Mar 31, 2008 3:51 pm
*~chelsea-n-kyle~*
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