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Welling Feelings (Song)

I love you
never thought I'd say that again
until I met you

you've been so cool
losing sleep over this feeling
that's welling up inside
building as days go by

(Chorus)
feelings welling up inside
showing the world isn't so bad
maybe a place for me after all
in our sorry excuse for a world

the world all around
shining more than the day before
even the nights
masking everything in silver moonlight

(Chorus)

reflections of you in the still water
that I look for every night
come and go in this pond here
showing there beautiful images to me

(Chorus)

you're perfect in my mind
you're personality, just the same
no matter what others say
you're the tree swaying in the wind

never thought I'd say this again
"I love you"
until I met you..

by funkyninja898
posted on 06/03/2008

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Comment by AshenNight: Jun 4, 2008 3:03 pm
Arrghh!
You are too good.
I envy you big time.
Hmph!

I really loathe your writing...mostly because it's beyond my league.
=/

When did you become so great...a head's up would have been nice.
Comment by darksideofme: Jun 5, 2008 5:50 pm
Good one man, the only thing is that the end stanza. It sounds like your saying "I love you" untill I met you as in its contridicting. Thats just how it sounds when you first read through it. Keep it just word it slightly clearer. Otherwise the entire thing is great man. You are truely a master of the metaphore.
Comment by ashuhhland: Jun 26, 2008 1:20 am
this is great
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