Poem of Quotes Members
Please log in below, or sign up.



Forgot Password?
Subscribe to a premium membership! Premium membership
Search for poetry anywhere! PoemofQuotes SE

Sun In My Universe

everytime you smile, I smile
everytime you laugh, I laugh
you cause me to become more outgoing
because of the comfort I find in you,
it makes me come out of my shell
no mater how strange I feel
and when I was running today
and I saw how beautiful the sky looked
with its clouds and sun shinning so brightly,
I thought of you
because that's what you are,
the sun in my universe
shinning brightly for all to see
and for everyone to feel
the warmth that you provide

by funkyninja898
posted on 06/24/2008

Vote: Vote upVote down
Comments: 9
Click here to send this poem to a friend

Comment by BrokenN2: Jun 24, 2008 6:51 pm
That's nice I like it
Comment by PrettyOdd: Jun 24, 2008 12:25 pm
Aww. That's so sweet.
Comment by AngelicallyBroken: Jun 24, 2008 5:22 pm
aww how cute bud,very nice! =]
Comment by rip17: Jul 1, 2008 12:56 am
I'm sure she felt amazing when you said those words =] Very good.
Comment by greybutterfly: Jun 25, 2008 3:23 pm
Smiley really sweet
Comment by XfroggieluverX: Jul 3, 2008 10:41 am
I Love This one!!!! its cute<3
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Jul 5, 2008 3:33 am
sweet
Comment by Maryellen: Jul 7, 2008 7:22 am
Sun In My Universe, for the title.
Comment by darksideofme: Jul 13, 2008 5:23 am
perfectly put
Add a comment: