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Endless night

Sitting here on a warm day looking
at the stars, thinking that you were
here lying down next to me on the
sandy beach gazing at the stars.
We saw a shooting star and we both
looked at each other and stared at
each other eyes and made a wish
then we touched lips to lips and smiled
we both knew what we wished for
the night will never end . Then I got
up to start to walk to the water and
heard a sweet voice yelling babe, babe I turned
and saw you running toward me with
arms open . While you were holding
me I started to laugh and said my wish came true.
You were here in my arms
and we both stared at the stars and
saw the shooting star and made a wish.
I know my wish came true; you were here in my arms.
We started to walk by the water holding hands,
in my head I thought that I didn't want the night to end.

by italjob2
posted on 03/23/2009

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Comment by JoeRyan: Mar 24, 2009 3:32 pm
niceeeeeeeee oneeeeeee SmileySmileySmiley what about "an endless night" for a title?????
Comment by italjob2: Mar 24, 2009 4:20 pm
Thankyou James
Comment by italjob2: Mar 24, 2009 4:19 pm
Thankyou joe
Comment by italjob2: Mar 24, 2009 4:19 pm
Thankyou babe true
Comment by true: Mar 24, 2009 1:19 am
what a romantic poem.... stars and beach whispiring LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!! you painted a really sweet picture full of love.....

be always 1 of the best.....

keep writing....Smiley
Comment by JamesR: Mar 24, 2009 3:08 am
Nice poem, how about for a title, "My wish came true", or something along those lines, "Your my wish" I dunno, maybe something more creative would be good for this poem. Once again, great poem.
Comment by Acheron: Mar 26, 2009 11:09 am
i agree with true it a wonderful piece
Comment by italjob2: Mar 26, 2009 4:37 pm
Thankyou acheron
Comment by Perpetual: Jun 3, 2009 7:20 am
aww, i love this poem. It's beautiful. Your an amazing writer, keep up the good work.
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