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unexpected

unexpected was when i heard your name.
unexpected was when i finally met you
unexpected was when you started loving me
unexpected was when you wouldnt stop loving me
unexpected was when we made love
but it will be extreamely unexpected if you end up with a kid.
it was unexpected when i didnt follow what i had said,
and did what i said that i wouldnt do.
it was unexpected when you asked me to marry you
knowing that we are only 15
unexpected was when i said yes.
the only thing tht wasnt unexpected was
when i said,
"I LOVE YOU TOO BABY!"

by coldfire146
posted on 06/21/2008

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Comment by PrettyOdd: Jun 23, 2008 4:13 pm
I agree with asdfyz, it's a good poem, if not a bit worrisome. Anyway, good job, and good luck.
Comment by asdfyz: Jun 22, 2008 5:47 pm
that is.... different. Poeticly, it's is great. I like the whole style of it. It's a good poem.

The thing that (concerns) me is the content. It is weird to read that and be like... wow your my age and... well you know. I wish the best for you two, but. weel I'm sure you've heard it many a time already so i won't say it again.
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