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ummmm

im trying to be the man you need me to be
im trying to prove all the love i have for you is real
im trying to make you happy
to show you how i really feel
im sorry if i get really short with you somedays
i just freeze up
and dont know what to say
i am open with you though
i just get scared to tell you
you cant ever go
if you ever leave ill be so alone
no where to go
no place but the hell i call home
so see i need you more than you need me
but i want you to be here
more than i have anything

by lookinfortherightgal
posted on 07/17/2007

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Comment by HarvardGirl: Jul 17, 2007 7:52 am
nice poem, she'll like it.
Comment by NeotericDawn: Jul 17, 2007 7:56 am
nice poem,she'll like it.
(haha Anna, its easier to mock youSticking tongue out)
Comment by HarvardGirl: Jul 17, 2007 8:00 am
you suck!
Comment by NeotericDawn: Jul 17, 2007 8:01 am
ahhhh!
Forget the friendship poem!
Anna, you're getting a hate poem!
Comment by HarvardGirl: Jul 17, 2007 8:02 am
well, then!
Comment by NeotericDawn: Jul 17, 2007 8:04 am
You'll just have to wait and see!
Comment by HarvardGirl: Jul 17, 2007 8:05 am
well, i will but only to mock you!ha!
Comment by NeotericDawn: Jul 17, 2007 8:06 am
Ha!
LOSER!
XD
Comment by HarvardGirl: Jul 17, 2007 8:07 am
we're not even talking about the poem what so ever!
Comment by HarvardGirl: Jul 17, 2007 8:08 am
It takes one to know one!
HA AND HA
Comment by NeotericDawn: Jul 17, 2007 8:09 am
oh well....um I think that Ryan will understand for using up this spaceSticking tongue out
Comment by NeotericDawn: Jul 17, 2007 8:10 am
Need I add another
HA!
(comes with an exclamaiton point)
And I am proud to be a loser thank you very muchSticking tongue out
Comment by HarvardGirl: Jul 17, 2007 8:10 am
yeah, im sure he will.
Comment by NeotericDawn: Jul 17, 2007 8:10 am
(exclamation*)
Comment by HarvardGirl: Jul 17, 2007 8:10 am
Well, i am proud to be a loser's friend! Sticking tongue out Sticking tongue out Sticking tongue out Sticking tongue out Sticking tongue out Sticking tongue out
HA!
Comment by NeotericDawn: Jul 17, 2007 8:15 am
HA!!
Sticking tongue out
LOL
Comment by HarvardGirl: Jul 17, 2007 8:42 am
i read your poem!
Comment by Reeses: Jul 17, 2007 11:25 am
um nice poem like itSmiley
Comment by NeotericDawn: Jul 17, 2007 12:26 pm
And so you see, I am broken, and you never knew.
Never did you try to make sure I was alright.
Never did you see that my wounds start to heal.
Never did you help me.
My poems say it all.
You never knew.
You never cared enough, not at all.
Comment by NeotericDawn: Jul 17, 2007 1:54 pm
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
sorry about that, I was kind of mad...
Will miss you..

I LOVE YOU!!!!
<3
Comment by McRluvr: Jul 17, 2007 3:09 pm
lol ya it's a really nice poem it will make her see how much you care bout her
Comment by NeotericDawn: Jul 17, 2007 3:12 pm
Don't worry Ryan, I believe what you are trying to say.
I love you!!!
And really, you are free, I will be back though!
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!
<3
Comment by friendZdogZ: Jul 24, 2007 3:27 am
nice poem
and boy there's always something goin on, on these things
Comment by MsKeys1707: Jul 31, 2007 11:14 am
very sweet
good poemSmiley
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