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Tonight I confess my love

Hey girl, It's really getting late
I Just wanted to let you know
I'm Lying here thinking about you
How my feelings continue to grow

Hey boy, I'm lying here
wishing you were beside me warm
my heart is about to explode with the dream
that we'd hold one another til dawn

You have had my every thought
Since the first day I met you
Your warmth, your passion your heart
All those little things you do

I remember the first time I saw your eyes
two stars shining out for me bright
the soft curve of your lips I imagine I'm kissing
night after night after night

If only you were here with me
With your hair lying on my face
Our lips would be together
You warmly in my embrace

Boy, my eyes are closing
I'm scared that I'm falling away
but in my dreams we'll dance together
til dawn beckons a new day

Ok girl, sweet dreams to you
I'll be with you very soon
For you are in my every dream
Lying close under the watchful moon

by Selene
posted on 10/18/2008

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Comment by copenboy: Oct 23, 2008 12:30 pm
im kinda new to this stuff thats pretty dam good
Comment by hollygirl: Oct 19, 2008 6:58 am
Great poem...I feel the love between the two
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Oct 20, 2008 1:21 pm
Lovely poem
Comment by darklilgirl: Mar 9, 2009 4:03 pm
wow!!!!! thats really good its wow!!!
Comment by lostangel: Oct 19, 2008 6:42 am
Awesome...Both of you are so talented. Great idea
Comment by tearsofpain: Oct 20, 2008 9:29 pm
Thank you for sharing this romance with us.. It is so touching and inspiring. I think I said "ahhhh" too.
Comment by cutiepie: Oct 23, 2008 9:06 am
awwww awsome poem, i could feel the emotions that they share, i feel all lubby dubby now.Smiley and i usually don't feel like that, once again a job very will done.Smiley
Comment by Brandon: Oct 18, 2008 2:11 pm
Thanks for the most incredible day. You are so special
Comment by angeliclove: Oct 18, 2008 2:16 pm
OMG... I have loved both of your poems . This is amazing...I LOVE IT...WOW
Comment by gabriella: Oct 18, 2008 2:56 pm
I love what you two have done. This is beautiful work.
I wish you two the best
Comment by flipsanity: Oct 18, 2008 4:44 pm
This is amazing. You two are incredible writers. Major props.
Comment by Sarahsmile: Oct 18, 2008 6:03 pm
Brilliant .... excellent collaboration of two great writers. completely beautiful
Comment by burningheart: Oct 19, 2008 8:55 am
What a sweet love poem I wish you two the best. excellent poem
Comment by jacobc: Oct 19, 2008 9:00 am
Mmm. Kinda seems stalker-ish. Sticking tongue out.
Comment by InMyDreams: Oct 19, 2008 9:27 am
I love this poem. Well written expression of love.
Comment by savoies9: Oct 19, 2008 1:55 pm
Wow this is awm(Y)
Comment by darksideofme: Oct 19, 2008 6:29 pm
This is what happens when two brilliant poets fall in love...... Truly a wonderful outcome..... this is beautiful.
Comment by crystalball: Oct 19, 2008 7:43 pm
Incredibly romantic with these two wonderful poets sharing there love for one another... beautiful
Comment by TearsofAcid: Oct 19, 2008 8:05 pm
I agree, this is spectacular. The product of two beautiful poets falling in love.
Comment by madz13379: Oct 20, 2008 7:12 am
It's a very smart idea and also well written...good job Smiley
Comment by blackheart: Oct 20, 2008 9:45 am
OMG this is so romantic..both the collaboration and the poem.
Comment by raylebron: Oct 20, 2008 11:43 am
This poem is awesome.
Comment by BigBird: Oct 20, 2008 12:53 pm
This is fantastic. I found myself doing the 'ahh' and taking a deep breath. It's love for sure. x
Comment by friendZdogZ: Oct 20, 2008 1:06 pm
aww that's so sweet and romantic!
I just LOVE it! Open smile
it's really got me smiling.
Comment by vason: Oct 20, 2008 11:33 pm
wow awesome
Comment by SoLittleTime: Oct 24, 2008 3:15 am
awww, so sweet, i can sense the love between you, its beautiful
Comment by trilogy: Oct 24, 2008 12:17 pm
Brilliant writing.. new love is one of the most wonderful things. I am blown away by you two.
Comment by poemsarebliss: Oct 25, 2008 2:13 am
damn nice!!!...
Comment by nakeeda: Oct 25, 2008 10:56 pm
wow really well done.. great job
Comment by mylifeasacutter: Oct 26, 2008 5:22 pm
love it!
Comment by cruelheart: Oct 26, 2008 8:08 pm
Brilliant...idea, words, love, you two doing this together is remarkable.
Comment by vannabugg: Oct 27, 2008 3:40 pm
AWWWW, I LIKE IT SO MUCH IT MADE ME THINK OF SOMEONE...
Comment by BloodLustingElf: Oct 30, 2008 1:18 pm
such a sweet poem, I love the way it is written. great job.
Comment by smiles: Oct 31, 2008 5:49 am
wow this poem is amazing Smiley i really like it
Comment by jordan24: Oct 31, 2008 9:55 am
I like the idea of switiching verses between eachother. Great job.
Comment by annemarielouis: Oct 31, 2008 1:51 pm
very good. i like the duet in the form of a poem, i've never seen that before.
Comment by sweetnrosie: Nov 2, 2008 8:45 am
i really really love this poem. i can feel the love and faith between you two. good job, keep it up!
Comment by Pleasurefull: Nov 2, 2008 10:08 am
wow! this is so creative i love it! absolutely do!
Comment by Bribri210: Nov 2, 2008 2:53 pm
wonderful!!! =]
Comment by CryinAngel: Nov 4, 2008 11:01 am
I've felt that way before. I really love it becouse i have already known what if felt like.
Comment by Hayley8281: Nov 4, 2008 2:48 pm
That's a Beautiful poem xxx
Comment by scarredemotions17: Nov 7, 2008 11:14 am
thats great and creative. i love how u two can write something together about ur lov. i wish me and my fiance could do that. very nice
Comment by watever76: Nov 7, 2008 9:56 pm
all i can say is wow
Comment by Finch: Nov 8, 2008 12:17 pm
Amazing. You two make a great team. xD
Comment by gothinlove: Nov 10, 2008 6:23 pm
Wow, this is very impressive work. Great pairing.
Comment by DarkCobra: Nov 16, 2008 8:43 pm
awwww...so sweet...so...awww nicely done that was TIGHT! you both rocked this site rocked it inside out Smiley
Comment by sereneblue: Nov 14, 2008 8:36 am
Adorable! love it!
Comment by Devald: Nov 15, 2008 11:41 pm
RECORD in comments Open smile +1 agreed with all of you
Comment by kafrynferrsure: Nov 19, 2008 5:32 am
Loveeee It.
Comment by Tinkerbellpixie: Nov 22, 2008 7:09 pm
so romantic and lots of emotion. it's an amazing poem and i love reading your guys' poems!
Comment by momochi: Dec 1, 2008 7:50 pm
its great
Comment by Angel: Dec 4, 2008 12:29 pm
very very great
Comment by lonelygal: Dec 12, 2008 6:10 pm
I wish I was like that. Great poem
Comment by mytragedy: Dec 17, 2008 10:02 pm
such an amazing piece of writing!!!!
Comment by squirrelluver2: Jan 2, 2009 11:46 am
the most romantic and beautiful thing i've ever read
its terrific
Comment by drdreya32: Jan 6, 2009 12:16 pm
grrrrrrrrrrrrreat!
Comment by jenni: Mar 6, 2009 3:39 pm
how sweet ou two are amazing writers. it's cool that you bothhave a passion for poetry and taht you can share with each other.
Comment by emogothjen: Feb 25, 2010 1:09 pm
wow, that's really sweet
Comment by Shellibean21: Oct 22, 2009 2:40 am
Aww so amazig i can just feel all the love between you to keep up the talent!!!
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