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Tired
God saw that she was getting tired
A cure was not to be
So he landed right beside her and whispered, “Come with me.”
A gold heart stopped beating
Hard working hands to rest
With tearful eyes we watched her drift away
God broke our hearts to show us
That he only takes the best.
by DeepDestruction
posted on 11/12/2009
A cure was not to be
So he landed right beside her and whispered, “Come with me.”
A gold heart stopped beating
Hard working hands to rest
With tearful eyes we watched her drift away
God broke our hearts to show us
That he only takes the best.
by DeepDestruction
posted on 11/12/2009
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Comment by lucidsaint: Nov 15, 2009 6:31 pm
i could apply this thought to one ive lost as well. thanks for thisComment by chiwa: Nov 16, 2009 3:53 pm
Very sad but I liked it a lot anyway. Comment by Jessc3: Nov 15, 2009 9:43 pm
Hard to critique a poem dedicated to your Grandma...try to improve on the way the poem flows. It was sad, however.Comment by doomsbringer: Nov 18, 2009 10:55 pm
The first three lines are actually a common graveyard headstone quote. Not sure about the rest of the poem. But I only critique on what I know.Comment by fruitloop199: Nov 12, 2009 9:01 am
wow this is really amazing...Comment by DeepDestruction: Nov 12, 2009 9:08 am
thanks its about my grandma <333Comment by harley: Nov 12, 2009 12:12 pm
wow this is truly incredible.
you did an amazing job.
*votes up*
Comment by ninasworld: Nov 12, 2009 1:32 pm
this is good
keep it up
Comment by marissab1221: Nov 13, 2009 3:25 pm
This is a really good poem...its actually amazing...you did a really good job on this poemComment by FaithfulFriend: Nov 13, 2009 11:31 pm
holy crap (and i never say that)
this is truly beautiful!
Comment by Elizajh: Nov 17, 2009 9:07 am
awww that was sad, but very beautiful. nice work.Comment by DeepDestruction: Nov 17, 2009 12:35 pm
thanks tht means alot to me al ur comments <33Comment by mydarkesthour144: Nov 17, 2009 8:28 pm
This is an amazing poem. truely. it says so much in so little words. freat jobb. keep on writingg 