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Timeless Love

...she walks slowly on land,
writing his name in the sand
and sets the wish by the waves on the sea.
Because both of them know
that they are chosen to flow
between Worlds, between Times,
to be free....

...that the Paths they walk on,
and the thoughts that guide them
are themselves from a forgotten Time.
That when they touch once again,
in no Time nor a Place
they'll be One Soul, One Heart, One....

...'tis a Dream when it'll be,
when Destiny opens them to see
what Love sowed inside them to grow.
In a time when Distance is naught,
and wistful Dreams are easily caught
they'll dance again at the end of the Rainbow....


I wrote this after watching 'The Lake House ' - not great, but a feel good movie - which I guess put me in a dreamy mood and inspired this poem.

by footprints
posted on 11/12/2007

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Comment by missingmom: Nov 12, 2007 6:45 am
I loved that movie! This is a great poem too. Smiley
Comment by kayla: Nov 12, 2007 8:48 am
I've never seem the movie, Your poem makes it sound like a must see...Great writingSmiley vote up!
Comment by tearsofrain: Nov 12, 2007 7:03 pm
how amazing the flow of this is.
i seriously got really caught up in it, and it was so surprisingly silky in its wording and shceme and everything.
amazing =}
Comment by floating: Nov 12, 2007 7:34 pm
Voted up. Beautiful.
Comment by merielrose: Nov 12, 2007 10:28 pm
Love that movie. Absolutely beautiful poetry.
Smiley
Comment by nickson104: Nov 28, 2007 11:08 am
never seen the movie but the poem was amazing, loving it XD vote up definitely
Comment by DeVdoll343: Nov 28, 2007 8:10 pm
This is so SO beautiful. I haven't seen the movie, but I will now. I love your use of capitalization, it really adds something. What a lovely feeling this poem evokes!
Comment by Bourne: Dec 18, 2007 8:28 pm
doll343 is right the caps do add a wicked intensity to it, not that it really needs it at all.
Comment by kassey: Dec 27, 2007 6:27 pm
Your comment on one of my poems made me curious about looking at yours. I am so glad the curiosity took me to Timeless Love. As many other comments say, a beautiful poem with a style of its own. I will also make sure I see the movie. Thank you------
Comment by Tequilla: Feb 29, 2008 12:35 pm
I loved that movie...lol...good poem!
Comment by SeaInsideMe: May 9, 2008 2:11 pm
beautifully done...i love the water imagery in the first stanza.
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