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This is a story of a girl..

This is the story of a girl
who hates her life
who hates the whole world

she walks on acting like its fine
then goes home
and screams and cries

she feels invisible to each and everyone
but out of the whole world
guess who cares??? NONE!!!

this is the story of a girl
who hates her life
who hates the whole world

she walks in the dark all alone
trying to get away
wanting to just be gone

she longs to be in someone else's shoes
but its just a choice
she cant choose

she was dealt this fate
and hates everyone for it
trusting them all is a BIG mistake

this is the story of a girl
who hates her life
who hates the whole world

one day he saw her across the room
saw her misery
saw her doom

he fell in love with her eyes
wanted to be with her
but she thought he was just a lie

she went home and thought that night
she realized she fell in love
she longed to be with him,she wanted him to hold her tight

he went home that night
wished for her to love him too
he longed to hold her and wipe her tears and let her know its all right

this is the story of a girl
who hates her life
who hates the whole world

the next day he promised her his heart
she smiled
and his body fell apart

they loved with a love no one could break
together forever
maybe this was her fate

that night he took her for a walk
they layed close and watched the stars
he leaned in close and whispered to the her "Never frown, even when your sad, because you never know who is falling in love with your smile"

she cried and promised her love
he kissed her tenderly
....

this is the story of a girl
who learned to love
who smiles more often
this is the girl who found the boy sent from above

~again this is written by my
friend Shelby, she didnt have an ccount when i first posted it but now
she does, she is *ShelbyBoo* so if you
want to tell her how she did you know
where to find her :)~

by trapped
posted on 11/20/2007

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Comments: 25
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Comment by ShelbyBoo: Nov 20, 2007 2:24 pm
haha Hayy Ryan, its me Shelby, I made an account now, but thanks for posting my poem like you said you would Smiley
well send me a message
see ya buddy

ps~this is my poem, Ryan just posted it for me cause i just got my account!
So how did I do?
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Nov 20, 2007 2:27 pm
that was amazing! tell your friend she got a real talent!
Comment by MysticFog: Nov 20, 2007 2:47 pm
Wow...that's just beautiful! I agree with ^^^ you have true talent! Amazing.
Comment by vampireheart: Nov 20, 2007 2:55 pm
well your friend did an amazing job!!!!!!!!!!
i love it!!!!!
Comment by lost_girl15: Nov 20, 2007 2:57 pm
hey this is a really great poem. i love it, and she does have talent
Comment by FreeFalling: Nov 20, 2007 4:47 pm
Awsome poem...she did a really good job.
Comment by loveseekerhatefinder: Nov 20, 2007 6:27 pm
Hey, great poem ,its sweet
Comment by kitten546: Nov 20, 2007 6:50 pm
wow shes great at writing she should create a file because this is really good!!!
Comment by McRluvr: Nov 20, 2007 8:17 pm
AWESOME!!! great story i like how you arranged it shelby.
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: Nov 20, 2007 10:35 pm
Awesome job!
Comment by MyMisery: Nov 21, 2007 10:33 am
Luv it let me know when u write a new one
Comment by punkprincess: Nov 21, 2007 2:06 pm
great poem, i <3 it. Smiley
Comment by nevagoodenoughx3: Nov 21, 2007 5:18 pm
aww thats so cute. amazing poem. keep it up
Comment by WonderzX0X0: Nov 22, 2007 4:14 pm
I absolutely love this poem!!! Tell hershe did a GREAT job!;]
Comment by InMyDreams: Nov 22, 2007 6:10 pm
aww its beautiful and so true, im looking forward to reading more
Comment by LilDeadPrincess: Nov 23, 2007 11:52 am
amazing <3
Comment by friendZdogZ: Nov 24, 2007 8:43 pm
aw great everyone already said what i was gonna say. anyways at leats you know how much i like-love it.
Comment by Yoshigirl: Nov 24, 2007 10:24 pm
I love this... It is soo cute!
Comment by laceylue08: Nov 27, 2007 11:24 am
i'm lovin' it...Smiley
Comment by Tonya: Nov 28, 2007 8:29 pm
omg that was soo awsome...i can relate to that and i am glad it had a happy ending. I VOTE IT UP...KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK GIRL!
Comment by romantichomicide: Nov 28, 2007 9:48 pm
very good
Comment by BeMyFriend: Nov 29, 2007 10:57 am
GOOD JOB GIRLIE
Comment by cowboylover: Dec 5, 2007 12:13 pm
wow, amazing, great job, shelby!
Comment by LilDeadPrincess: Dec 6, 2007 3:18 pm
sounds like me at the moment lolz
Comment by UpAgainstTheWall: Jan 8, 2008 12:53 am
i really like this, good job
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