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There will come soft rain

you feel so cold
you feel so old
you feel like everyone hates you in this world

but when you stand outside so alone
the rain hits you like falling stones
It reminds you of your parents pushing you around
you fall to you're knees onto the ground
then you look around
you look at the things you don't have
It makes you so sad

But then someone holds out there hand
you look up at a handsom man
he pulls you to your feet
then ya'll eyes meet
ya'll eyes are locked in place
Then he lifts his hand and brushes it against your cheak bone on your face
then his soft gentle touch leaves you a beautiful tingling feeling
and when your lips touch
you seem to forget so much

then you look up to realize the stone falling rain drops went away
But soft rain drops had stayed
then he comes close to you ear
he wispers there will come soft rain
just the thing you wanted to here



the two people are me and forevergone1790

by teardrops
posted on 02/11/2008

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Comment by HeartlessAngel: Feb 11, 2008 1:37 pm
that's cute
Comment by cryingblackblood: Feb 11, 2008 1:51 pm
chicka i think you have a bit of an obsession with forevergone1790...its kinda cute but don't gt oo obsessed about someone you've never met! great poem Smiley
Comment by andypandy114: Feb 11, 2008 2:31 pm
wow you even messaged me about why i said please dont say this is to a stranger before .
please remember, there are so many people who get raped and killed cuz of strangers of the internet . you think it will never happen to you but it could happen . dont be careless, espicially if you never met this guy .
becareful .
and great poem by the way .
Comment by teardrops: Feb 11, 2008 4:01 pm
yeah but i am going to see him soon. and he's not like that!!!!!!!
Comment by teardrops: Feb 11, 2008 4:12 pm
he won't rape me!!!!!!!!! I love him so much!!!!!!!And he loves me!!!!!!
Comment by forevergone1790: Feb 11, 2008 4:49 pm
Aww!! very cute

and yes i love you very much
and andypany is right there are many people on the internet that you don't know that can do and will con you into seeing them to rape you
but you are also right about me i am not a stranger and i am not a rapist i would never rape you everything is at your own pace you let me no what you want to feel next in your own feeling and emotions ok.. i love you to

xoxoxoxoxoxo
Comment by SinnerIndeed: Feb 11, 2008 5:00 pm
Lol I think it's really cute Smiley Hope everything works out for you!
Comment by Freewriter91: Feb 12, 2008 12:49 pm
aweosme job good job
Comment by friendZdogZ: Feb 12, 2008 12:57 pm
yea cute. but be careful though. i'm not saying that he is or anything but just becasue he says he isn't doesn't make it true. so just be careful, good luck too.
Comment by darksideofme: Feb 14, 2008 8:32 am
wow people need to chill out. people meet over the internet all the time. Its when you plan for sex with someone over the internet that they are usaully the rapists. leave her alone
Comment by hiddeninblood: Mar 25, 2008 10:26 am
wow very good poem...
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