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The Perfect Morning

We’re laying in bed, you’re holding me while I dream…
Slowly and ever so softly, you kiss me awake…
I open my eyes and immediately get lost in yours…
You smile so sweetly and we lean in to kiss…
Then we hear it, the sound of our bedroom door opening…
We smile as we see four pairs of eyes looking back at us…
All of a sudden, they start to laugh and climb in bed with us…
Just as we are getting settled, a soft voice whispers to me…
“Hit daddy with the pillow”, and I do…
That leads to you throwing a pillow at me, and a little boy yelling…
“Don’t hit my mommy!” then he tackles you…
Before we know it, all six of us are engaged in the ultimate tickle war…
But ten minutes later, it’s just you and me…
We are leaned up against the headboard, four sleeping children on our laps…
You ask me if I think we could sneak away, I say if we’re really quiet we might…
We climb out of bed with infinite slowness, and then make a break for the door…
Just as I turn the handle, you head back towards the bed…
And put a loving smile on my face as you cover up our children…
You take my hand and lead me out the door, not stopping until we’re on the porch…
Then you pull me into your arms and hold me while we watch the sun rise…
I look up at you and smile, you look down into my eyes…
And we come together for the perfect kiss…

by harley
posted on 05/27/2009

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Comment by Acheron: May 27, 2009 9:56 am
WOW Smiley i love it
this is amazing, great work Harley keep it up
Comment by roar: May 27, 2009 10:03 am
aww, Harley! this is sweet. keep it up (:


and this will come true. he'll change his mind or something.
Comment by tylerking93: May 27, 2009 11:28 am
woh.... that was more of an emotion 4 me.... ur a god
Comment by HappyGoLucky: May 27, 2009 11:55 am
I don't think any other poem can evoke that much emotion, thats a fantastic poem! The imagery is amazing and it's so happy =] Great job my love!

ps: tylerking93 is right, your a god! lol
Comment by secretskeptinside: May 27, 2009 1:21 pm
that is the sweetest thing I've ever read. I really hope to be in a relationship like that someday.
Comment by Acheron: May 27, 2009 4:42 pm
i love reading this peom
i want a morning like this one someday
Comment by ForeverSearching: May 27, 2009 4:53 pm
you should write stories- i think- i feel that you would be really great at it.
Comment by tealtear: May 27, 2009 8:18 pm
This is so cute! Great job, you're fantastic!
Comment by Perpetual: May 27, 2009 10:42 pm
great write harley. keep it up
Smiley
Comment by Kiam: May 28, 2009 12:04 am
cool aoww
Comment by NikisNightmare: May 28, 2009 8:53 am
although i don't know you, i can tell you wouldn't be the same without the love in your life. I know that without my fiance (who also shares the name harley with you), I would be completly changed. Your poetry is wonderful, and i'm really liking how deep your passion runs.
Comment by Xxsearch4lifexX: May 28, 2009 9:53 am
amaizing.
i wish my parents were like that.
my house is a sad place to be in the morning with all the yelling.
its never a pretty sight.
Comment by gelid: May 28, 2009 12:38 pm
AW harley, thats so amazingly cute! i love how it plays out like a story, and it does sound like the most perfect morning ever. Smiley
Comment by Basehunter18: Jun 2, 2009 7:36 pm
if owny my mornings were like
that
Comment by wordfreak: Jun 11, 2009 10:52 pm
awhhh
thats so sweet!
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