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Burning Skies

Reaching out to grab a hold
Never thought I would be this bold
You’re the one who makes me laugh when I’m about to cry
You’re the Midnight sun in my burning skies

The ocean in me calms when you say those words
Alone in my room lost in our worlds
You’re the apple of my eye
You’re the Midnight sun in my burning skies

The first thought on my mind is of your smile
The feeling in me can run on for miles
You the one in witch my future leys
You’re the Midnight sun in my burning skies

My love for you runs deep and strong
I want to shout to the world about how I was so wrong
You’re the one for whom I could die
You’re the Midnight sun in my burning skies

(I love you Cristy)

by Acheron
posted on 10/27/2009

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Comment by LunaGetsuna: Oct 28, 2009 5:21 am
Awwww! Shell love it
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Oct 28, 2009 9:44 am
WOW...*in awe*

This is soooooo beautiful. Deep and touching and gah! ...*smiling brightly* How lovely, I'm sure she'll love this Sean Smiley
Comment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: Oct 28, 2009 11:02 am
cristy doesn't know how lucky she is
Comment by allieykat: Oct 28, 2009 2:21 pm
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!! thats such a beautiful poem
Comment by cocosbaby10: Oct 29, 2009 6:37 am
that was beautiful! She'll love every word of it!
Comment by Leeshio: Oct 29, 2009 6:29 pm
absoultley beautiful
Comment by darknessofcrows: Oct 29, 2009 8:22 pm
This is so very deep and touching, well done my friend, it would seem that you are at your best when in love. Well done, excellent.
Comment by LostInDarkness: Oct 30, 2009 2:47 pm
This is soooooo sweet XD great job!
Comment by Throughwithlove14: Nov 1, 2009 11:16 am
Wowzerzzzz=]]
Comment by Selene: Nov 1, 2009 5:03 pm
definately understand what you're saying in this one, beautiful feelings poured onto the page. masterfully written my friend.
Comment by mybeloved: Nov 2, 2009 4:41 pm
i absolutely love this and feel it very deeply
Comment by SadScene1616: Nov 10, 2009 1:02 pm
this poem is beautiful Smiley
Comment by HowlToTheMoon: Nov 15, 2009 7:21 pm
she should be honored. she is a very lucky girl with a very poetic lover. :]
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