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Tell Me If This Be Love

If you were the clouds
And raindrops your kiss,
I’d drown in your showers
Of liquid-sliver bliss.

If you were the flowers
And dewdrops your tears,
I’d make a bed of petals
To wash away my fears.

If you were the violin
And the notes your voice
I’d listen to your singing
To my heart’s rejoice.

by seekerblue
posted on 06/19/2009

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Comments: 32
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Comment by harley: Jun 21, 2009 7:27 am
definitely love
this is wonderfully written
great job Smiley
Comment by Jacqlyn: Jul 30, 2009 3:02 pm
i love this oem i showed it to my boyfriend.
i hope he likes it.
Smiley
Comment by mydarkesthour144: Jul 9, 2009 1:36 pm
aww ohmigod i am in love with this poem... great poem never stop writting :]
Comment by jxberber: Jul 9, 2009 11:15 am
Great Poem!
Comment by Snoman: Aug 7, 2009 2:38 pm
it reminds me of that poem...

If a kiss was a raindrop
I’d send you a shower
If a hug was a second
I’d send you an hour
If a smile was water
I’d send you the sea
If you needed love
I’d send you me

i think it's quite good though...
Comment by LostLover: Jun 24, 2009 1:06 pm
this is a great poem, filled with lots of love, this person is very lucky to have you ^_^
Comment by Luv4shelly: Jun 28, 2009 7:20 am
You thought this was cheesy? no it is not, it is really sweet (unless that is your definition of cheesy...)
Comment by Angel: Jun 20, 2009 3:40 pm
magnificent, just magnificent, i swear, vote up.Smiley
Comment by unsocial329: Jun 20, 2009 2:32 pm
That IS Love, aww Smiley That's so nice
Comment by Venivik: Jun 20, 2009 1:26 pm
Awesome
Comment by fafisking: Jul 18, 2009 7:11 pm
very nice!

i like it a lot.
your talented


check mine out! im new =p
Comment by solonely: Jun 22, 2009 10:15 am
sounds like love to me Smiley
Comment by NOshizz: Jun 26, 2009 2:25 pm
GIVE UP...



...OR RELEASE IT INTO THE WILD TO DIRE
Comment by gelid: Jun 19, 2009 6:41 am
omgoodness thats amazingly cute!! great poem!!! Smiley (:
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Jun 19, 2009 12:44 pm
*smiling* this is increadibly sweet and creative and just lovely! and beautiful and thought through :]
wonderful! votin' up! :]
Comment by AngelShadow: Jun 19, 2009 3:10 pm
B-E-A-utiful
LUVED it!
Comment by dryofbadexcuses: Jun 21, 2009 7:07 pm
great, loved it,! (:
Comment by rookiepoet: Jun 30, 2009 10:10 pm
The first stanza was amazing..... the rest was 2 tho, keep up the good work
Comment by BlackRose: Jul 2, 2009 9:11 pm
nice
Comment by cwslaw: Jul 3, 2009 9:33 am
nice
Comment by creativewriter93: Jul 13, 2009 10:14 am
beautifully romantic. love it all the way. keep up the writingA!! Smiley
Comment by jmdkblopez5: Aug 2, 2009 6:35 pm
great poem.
Comment by Alexanne: Aug 29, 2009 2:58 am
wow. awesome!
Comment by blackfallenrose07: Sep 3, 2009 5:09 pm
CUTEE =)
Comment by BreakupMakeup: Sep 5, 2009 12:50 pm
Amazing!
Comment by xxemoblainexx: Sep 8, 2009 3:58 pm
do u mind if i use this its perfect for how im feeling about this guy and it would mean alot if u would let me use it i will put ur name in it and everything
Comment by DanceInside: Sep 10, 2009 10:09 pm
Very nice poem.
Comment by vicarous: Sep 14, 2009 7:07 pm
Dnag! i love this poem!! outstanding job!!
Comment by Shortie14: Sep 14, 2009 7:10 pm
this is really gudd...i love it...
Comment by secretskeptinside: Oct 6, 2009 4:37 pm
short and sweet. that was really good, you captured love perfectly.
Comment by secretskeptinside: Oct 22, 2009 12:21 pm
awww that was really sweet, Great poem. I loved it.
Comment by dannaenae94: Oct 23, 2009 9:29 am
wow this is amazing. im kinda jealous! great job!!
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