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Tell her this

He's lost and disconnected
He's getting by but i know he feels so worthless
I try my hardest to pick him up,
the best that i can
Only he dosn't understand.

I feel so underestimated
I'm scared and i'm getting nervous
I know he can't do it all alone
but now we have each other
So please come back home.

Its getting late, the fire burned out.
(you say)
stay the night, stay another day.
My eyes are caving in
I dont think i can win this
I'm hitting the surface fast and hard
(you say)
I wont let go
i told you so
Its you and i
now dont you cry
Dont ever worry
If you need me, call my name..and I'll be there in a hurry.

by chazie
posted on 06/26/2007

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Comment by oldman: Jun 26, 2007 11:44 pm
very sweet and tender. A floating moment. It walks like a type rope. I will read it again to see if anything else lowers from the floating moments. Smiley
Comment by footprints: Jun 27, 2007 9:14 am
I really enjoyed this.. full of what cannot be, mixed with feelings of love.
Comment by man0fst33l: Jun 29, 2007 10:30 am
It's interesting the way this was written, I like it.
Comment by DeVdoll343: Jul 1, 2007 3:24 pm
I love this. Very very interesting. Its a promise, theres some love and sadness in there. I'm curious to read more about this! Keep writing Smiley
Comment by lostandlonely: Aug 29, 2007 1:55 pm
awww i love it!! ~Amber~
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