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Tears in her Eyes

She cries in her sleep
Even her dreams are sad
All the broken promises
The love she wished she had

As if it were made of paper
Her heart is torn and tattered
Wondering if she died tonight
To anyone would it matter

Will someone break the chains
Free her soul and let it fly
Or will it just be forgotten
To simply wither away and die

There is someone for everyone
She found that true one day
The chains broke and she was free
Her happiness was there to stay

That night he held her close
Whispered please baby don't cry
Only this time it was happiness
That brought the tears to her eyes

by Brandon
posted on 01/15/2009

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Comments: 92
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Comment by ForgottenMemory: Mar 9, 2009 5:07 pm
good job i loved it
Comment by hallibu: Feb 6, 2009 9:37 pm
I really enjoyed this poem, keep it up!!
Comment by lostangel: Jan 18, 2009 8:53 pm
This poem is an inspiration to those who have given up on finding love.Great writing
Comment by gothinlove: Jan 18, 2009 6:43 pm
great poem. it made me cry too
Comment by eligra515: Jan 16, 2009 7:22 am
I teared up-truly. It's almost as if you knew what I have been through in my life..every peice of it. Very touching-amazing! =)
Comment by eligra515: Jan 16, 2009 7:21 am
I teared up-truly. It's almost as if you knew what I have been through in my life..every peice of it. Very touching-amazing! =)
Comment by Flower: Jan 15, 2009 10:23 pm
Thank you for the hope of happiness, Great writing
Comment by Sarahsmile: Jan 15, 2009 10:46 pm
Great poem
keep up the good work
Comment by Chudly33: Jan 15, 2009 11:44 pm
nice work, i like the happy neding
Comment by amyjohnson: Jan 16, 2009 3:39 am
i like this poem so much, because this poem makes me feel that who is in the poem is me. thats me between love and loneliness, between sadness and happiness.. good job
Comment by Mermaid: Jan 16, 2009 6:52 am
I think alot of us lonely girls can appreciate a poem like this! Great job, I really enjoy your work.
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Jan 16, 2009 8:53 am
Yes I agree with Mermaid. Wonderful poem. Brought a smile to my face Smiley
Comment by mytragedy: Jan 16, 2009 11:11 am
Wonderfully written
This poem is great
Comment by watsmyproblem: Jan 16, 2009 12:35 pm
wow amazing!!
Comment by therealb: Jan 16, 2009 1:07 pm
great poem!! glad everything worked out for her!!
Comment by gabriella: Jan 16, 2009 1:16 pm
I have been there before
I really enjoy reading your poems
Comment by friendZdogZ: Jan 16, 2009 2:01 pm
this is really beautiful.
a happy ending story.
Smiley great poem
Comment by Angel: Jan 16, 2009 3:19 pm
awsome this one is really good, like the ending. I give it a vote up.
Comment by trueblessings: Jan 16, 2009 3:52 pm
that's so sweet! so amazing... love it. VOTE UP! i love all of it.
Comment by SoLittleTime: Jan 16, 2009 11:22 pm
it'd be nice if it was always like this, wouldnt it?
great poem, really sweet
Comment by poemsarebliss: Jan 17, 2009 4:05 am
its such a pretty poem!..love it a lot!!...
Comment by Minah13: Jan 17, 2009 7:56 am
i like this poem
Comment by Selene: Jan 17, 2009 9:18 am
beautiful as always
Comment by brokenheartedarmysister: Jan 17, 2009 5:50 pm
amazing made me cry we need to talk
Comment by lifendslovedoesnt: Jan 17, 2009 5:58 pm
I love this, it made me cry, I can totally relate to this, except I've found the someone for me, and he doesn't love me...
Comment by mylifeasacutter: Jan 17, 2009 7:44 pm
your amazing i almost cried...i wish this was true for me you know?
Comment by angeliclove: Jan 17, 2009 9:44 pm
We all hope for that happy ending
This is a wonderful poem
Comment by darkprincess: Jan 17, 2009 9:47 pm
It made me cry and gave me hope all at the same time
such a lovely poem
Comment by fallingagain: Jan 17, 2009 9:53 pm
superb writing
love your writing style
Comment by Kylie: Jan 18, 2009 11:31 am
cool poem
thank you for the tears of joy
that you give me
seeya later
Comment by Tinkerbellpixie: Jan 18, 2009 2:12 pm
Really beautiful poem that brings some light into everyone's life even for just a moment. Nice job.
Comment by kiraralee77: Mar 10, 2009 10:03 am
this is so sweet... i got teary eyed at the end. great work.. it is beautiful i agree. keep writing!!
Comment by inthecold: Jan 19, 2009 6:03 am
wow, great poem
I can relate to your writing
Comment by blackheart: Jan 19, 2009 7:17 am
this is a really encouraging poem
I really do love it
Comment by heartlesslover: Jan 19, 2009 8:13 am
great poem
it made me smile
Comment by Josef: Jan 20, 2009 3:56 am
I think I can relate! If only the subject was a he =). Anyway, nice work! I like it!
Comment by BitterSweet: Jan 20, 2009 8:40 am
I wish there were many people who agree with you, for I have seen cruel part of the life, which left me greater impression of the world. Pleasant work.
Comment by robynbobbin: Jan 20, 2009 10:59 am
i like this poem, it's cute!
Comment by cutiepie: Jan 20, 2009 3:37 pm
awwww...how cute i love this

oh my god...this is my favorite...
i...umm...yea...
this made me cry...
wow... i just cant get over how good this is.
Comment by Loveneet: Jan 20, 2009 6:22 pm
Just 5 stanzas create an environment....awesome
Comment by fallenangel6636: Jan 22, 2009 12:51 pm
wow, this is an amazing poem. itm printing it out and puting it on my bedroom door with the other poems i love.
thanks, and keep writing! ur awesome!
Comment by SandhyaMaya: Jan 22, 2009 11:53 pm
awesome poem. very emotional.
i think lots of people can identify themselves with this poem, its beautiful.
Comment by camaria: Jan 24, 2009 6:50 am
that seems to be the story of my life. nice piece
Comment by BurningAngel: Jan 24, 2009 6:16 pm
i love it great job like always Smiley
Comment by MyMisery: Sep 1, 2009 5:57 am
I have to agree this is lovely you have a way with words
Comment by nothingisimpossible: Jan 28, 2009 10:18 am
lOVELY poem!!!I liked it very much!!!!Keep writing :::::::::::::::::::::
Comment by lionxxlamb: Jan 29, 2009 10:34 am
That is so beautiful, I just really cried. Keep writing.
Comment by Pandorra13: Jan 30, 2009 8:50 am
amazing, so sweet, i have been that girl many times so it really spoke to me. just beautiful
Comment by safwa: Feb 1, 2009 5:05 pm
There is someone for everyone
She found that true one day

I really like these words ,,

keep going on ,,
Comment by KatieBunny: Feb 4, 2009 7:58 pm
WOW, I really did enjoy this. what started off sad turned into something happy. definetly brought me back a little ways. good job
Comment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: Feb 5, 2009 2:35 pm
you write really good poetry
Comment by 0oAngelo0: Feb 7, 2009 9:11 pm
Hey. i really love this.
your a great writer. good enough for a book.
xx love and light 0oAngelo0 xx
Comment by ForgottenMemory: Feb 8, 2009 1:16 pm
This was a really great poem, you are an amazing writer!!
Comment by ForgottenMemory: Feb 8, 2009 1:16 pm
This was a really great poem, you are an amazing writer!!
Comment by christi823: Feb 9, 2009 8:54 am
Wow..
That made me smile for the first time today.

Thank you for that amazing read.
[:
Comment by myheartisbroken321: Feb 10, 2009 10:35 pm
I love, love
Comment by christi823: Feb 11, 2009 8:46 am
I can't help but comment this again..

I nearly cry when I read this now. When I do, it sends this pang of heartache through me. Not many poems can do that to me.
But this is that amazing.
Again, thank you. [:
Comment by pranj: Feb 18, 2009 5:18 am
A great poem you have written!
The words and emotions are flowing so swiftly, togather!
really great!
Comment by donewitlove: Feb 19, 2009 2:15 pm
great poem! and i can definantly relate to the girl in the poem
Comment by deadiam: Feb 23, 2009 2:33 pm
this poem is really beautiful, i really enjoyed it
Comment by jenni: Mar 6, 2009 3:35 pm
you are an amazing writer. you have the ability to appel to a huge population through your poetry but yet it feels personal. I loved it!
Comment by MalakDafy: Feb 23, 2009 10:28 pm
Excuse me for a second.
But you are the only reason of being here on this network.
Coincidently I saw this site while goggling and I stopped couple of times just to read your poetries ..!
You are PHENOMENA and truly gifted by God.
Comment by Ruth123: Mar 13, 2009 12:35 pm
awwwwwwwwwwwww
that was sooo vute i wish someday that happens to me!!!!!!!!!
Comment by chelsea: Feb 25, 2009 7:54 am
omgg awwe this is so adorble!
Comment by huzi8t9: Mar 2, 2009 11:32 pm
I don't think I can compliment your work quite like the others have but this is truly and amazing poem. You're a very gifted writter, don't let it go to waste. Vote Up.
Comment by Sweetblood: Mar 5, 2009 8:55 pm
You have a gift, plese keep writing!
Comment by Ruth123: Mar 13, 2009 12:34 pm
omg that was soooo cut i loved it
i wish some how that happens to me!!!!!
Comment by deep: Mar 7, 2009 9:41 am

such a nice poem

your style is new
good job //
Comment by neo: Mar 7, 2009 7:35 pm
Nice poem I hope everybody will have the chance to find a similar ending in his own life
Comment by writ3r: Mar 8, 2009 5:01 pm
beautiful...i liked it alot..
Comment by forgottenfairy: Mar 11, 2009 7:59 pm
Thats beautiful.. really just beautifully written.
Comment by bubbles13: Mar 13, 2009 5:17 pm
This has happened to me so many times. Its hard to deal with.
Comment by scared2bealone: Mar 19, 2009 3:00 am
amazing!!! how your words mix emotions into perfectionOpen smile an amazing job and it really interprets the message it made me smile
Comment by Luv4shelly: Mar 19, 2009 1:14 pm
This is amazing, it is like you read my mind.
Comment by Heartbroken120: Mar 22, 2009 4:44 pm
that was beautiful. i loved it.
Comment by LittleDareDevil: Mar 23, 2009 10:53 am
Really beautiful poem! keep on doing the awesome work!
Comment by arabianqu33n: Mar 31, 2009 10:23 pm
aww..this poem is so beautiful...good job
Comment by alysiarulz: Apr 13, 2009 12:41 pm
BEAUTIFUL, simply beautiful
Comment by KCFangel: Apr 27, 2009 9:55 pm
aww im crying!!! Sad face but it's good tears...i think...
Comment by Duchess21: May 2, 2009 5:17 pm
I love it because the readers can actually relate. You always put a lot of effort into your poems.
Comment by lawbound22: May 3, 2009 11:23 pm
your a punk. i actually like your work. i read two now i gotta read all of them.
Comment by MrsPerez: May 6, 2009 8:26 am
I've read three of your poems, and there simply amazing, loving and breaking up, becoming broken, i've experienced them as well. I just will never give up, and neither should u.
Comment by alysiarulz: May 21, 2009 2:48 pm
this was beautifulll... amazing poem- as usual
Comment by christinababe903: Jun 7, 2009 11:20 am
beuatiful
Comment by bluzzfan: Jun 18, 2009 6:33 pm
Great job! I loved it!
Comment by BlackRose: Jul 2, 2009 9:23 pm
this was so good it made me think alot on my self nice
Comment by em: Aug 4, 2009 6:51 pm
that was amazing! if i was not in class, i would be crying. very beautiful
Comment by RazorBladeAngel15: Aug 17, 2009 6:37 pm
thias is so beautiful and sad i love it so much it made me get all teary eyed V_v
Comment by Alexanne: Aug 30, 2009 1:51 am
beautiful..
Comment by Thatgirl2013: Oct 19, 2009 11:02 am
Your an amazing writer!!!;)
Comment by nina777: Nov 3, 2009 1:31 pm
nice poem i like it
Comment by TiffantAnnLoganAdams: Nov 16, 2009 10:22 am
i loved it so much. I could so relate to it so much
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