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Somebody of Someone

Someone I can count on
Someone I can trust
Someone who will never leave
And who living with is a must

Someone who does their best to help
Someone who really cares
Someone who wants to pitch in
And wants to always be there

Someone who makes me feel special
Like I am really am somebody
Like I'm not a freak,
Or an outcast or geek,
And shows me I'm not a nobody

Someone who cares for my needs
And does what a significant other should
Someone who wants to be with me, for me
And wouldn't leave me even if she could

Someone who makes me feel so lucky
And makes me wonder what I did to deserve,
Such a wonderful person,
Such a wonderful woman
And a relationship that I hope to preserve

She's someone who I love
Someone who I care about
Someone who I could never leave
And could never live without

I am proud to be the somebody
Of this amazing someone
And that I finally see
And I am glad to be
Her only one

by DarkDevotions
posted on 03/02/2008

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Comment by crazyforcodymylove: Mar 2, 2008 7:53 pm
wow great poem!!!! i vote up!!
Comment by Bourne: Mar 2, 2008 9:08 pm
wow you certainly have devotion thats for sure. amazing job.
Comment by babyboogt82886: Mar 3, 2008 6:03 am
wow simply fantastic! great work! Smiley
Comment by missingmom: Mar 3, 2008 7:39 am
Beautiful Josh! Hurray for you!Smiley
Comment by hiddeninblood: Mar 3, 2008 8:40 am
great poem...
Comment by Tequilla: Mar 3, 2008 10:55 am
Wow, really good poem, love it! Vote Up.
Comment by AFireInYourEyes18: Mar 4, 2008 6:36 am
yeah ^^ def up it go's
Comment by Devilsson: Mar 4, 2008 7:06 am
Cool. Not really just tryin to get points, it sucks
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: Mar 4, 2008 9:20 am
good poem Smiley ignore devilsson. it is good Smiley
Comment by DarkDevotions: Mar 4, 2008 5:18 pm
I always ignore anyone trying to be ignorant, no worries.
Comment by danielle: Mar 5, 2008 12:32 am
its really good..
and so nicely written...
good job..
(devils dont know anything about love. and neither do their sons)
Comment by sassicat: Mar 5, 2008 5:33 am
really great poem, i love it!
Comment by BrokenHeartsTornUpLetters: Mar 6, 2008 6:16 am
amazing........
really nicely written Smiley
Comment by Mangekyo: Mar 6, 2008 12:26 pm
indeed a piece to reread.........dont u think?
i have already read it 25 times
Comment by angelofthereaper: Mar 6, 2008 1:22 pm
pretty poem nice
Comment by candy14: Mar 6, 2008 2:35 pm
i like this one get at me
Comment by leadme2temptation: Mar 7, 2008 9:07 pm
i like it its great
Comment by calixmeusinebrians: Mar 9, 2008 7:09 am
Nice
Comment by HisImperfection: Mar 9, 2008 1:15 pm
very beatiful
Comment by JennaJo: Mar 9, 2008 6:43 pm
Yes. Nicely done.
Comment by LaurelJahn: Mar 10, 2008 4:23 pm
It's ok. All stanzas should have 4 lines to make it sound much better.
Comment by DarkDevotions: Mar 11, 2008 7:12 pm
You don't always need all stanzas to have four lines for a poem to sound good. I was trying to convey a message, I was going for my own sound. Don't criticize unless you can tell what the writer him/herself was really going for with the piece they wrote.
Comment by copeyz90: Mar 12, 2008 6:41 am
True very true, great poemSmiley
Comment by sefowns1: Mar 12, 2008 8:03 am
sick
Comment by thestewardofgondor: Mar 12, 2008 11:15 am
that is wonderful!

Marvelous!!!!!
Comment by faerieoracle3255: Apr 5, 2008 3:59 pm
true devotion like this will preserve a love like this
Comment by KelseyJanet07: Apr 16, 2008 11:02 am
aww... That is such a cute, awesome, wonderful, all of the above poem. I wish my boyfriend could be creative like you! And write me something like that!
Comment by MsKeys1707: Apr 18, 2008 11:53 am
Omg I love this so much!
It reminds me of me and my boyfriend 100%, how he feels about me and how I feel about him..
It is soo weird because almost everything expressed in this poem my boyfriend has said to me...
This is definitely the best love poem I've read in a whileSmiley
Keep Writing Congrats on your relationship and take careSmiley
Comment by ewallien: May 8, 2008 11:17 am
that was areally sweet poem... way to express your feelings... you did a great job!
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