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since 11-12-07

[[the short version of things]]
so it all started with:

you learning the drums...
me && my friend were picking up briana
& noticed you...you slammed the door
&& we went 'EEEMMOOOOOO!'

to

wanting to buryy someone in your backyard? [idr who]

to

'HOLD MY LIZARD'
'no thanks...wheres his tail?'
'it fell of...'
*walks away*

to

'LOGAN COME SIT WITH ME! I DONT WANT SOME FAT RANOMD PERSON TO!'
'okay...'

to

'ill deff be at your house on halloween'
'ill give you pizza'
'SWEET STUFF!'

to

'weres my pizza?'
'its in the house...you can go get it'
'eghhh...nvm. your house looks kinda creepy...'
*walks away*

to

'im gonna be normal'
'why?'
'idl...just to try it.'
'dont.'
'why?'
'i lile it when youre hyper...and besides, noone likes a normal person right?'
'guess not...'

*then i started to like you*

to

'NESSA! CAN YOU BAKE A PIE!?'
'what?'
'a pie...can you bake?'
'yea...'
can you help me bake one?'
'sure...?'

to

'okay...wheres the ingridients?'
'we thought youd know that...'
'you need to have them...'
'youre the one who knows how to bake...'
'were using a real pumpkin?'
'yea...is that a problem?'
'YEA!'

to

'my neighbors rascist btw'
*go to her house*
'you coming in?'
'NO! stay here with me logan...'
'kay'
*put your arm around me*

to

'beware of mr humpy'
'how?'
*tiny dog leg humps me*
*you drag him of multiple ties*
*he rins back each time to get more*
*i left that house quick as hell*

to

'we need eggs...'
'okay go to my house && get them'
'kay...but shes coming with me'
'i am?'
'yea.'
'kay...'
*get there && his brother is creepy*
'got the eggs?'
'yea. i got extras to throw at henry'
'NICE.'

to

'can i throw it?'
'sure...'
*i thro eg && it bounces of henrny's head*

to

'that pie is nasty'
'feed it to sammy'
*gives dog pie*
'LOOK! SHE WONT EVEN EAT IT!'

to

'lets give it to henry'
'kay. tell him it was good'
*henry loves it, his mom wants to die*

to

'lets burry that pumkin'
'where'
'somewhere random'

to

*being in your room meeting gekie letting him climb on me...then just hugging you*
[[you stayed at my house till like 11 that night]

to

*sitting with you on my couch, your arm around me, my head on your shoulder...your sister walks in*
'BRIANA! WERE GONNA BE SISTER-IN-LAWS'
'yepp. were deff gettin married tuesday'

to

'LOOOGAN! DO YOU KNOW WHAT THIS IS?'
'what'
'ITS AN 'A' FOR AWSOME! WICH IS WHAT YOU ARE!'

to

*walmart*

to

on im: [[11-12-07]]
'shes here'
'who'
'your girlfriend...'
'well, she must be a catipillar. i dont have a girlfriend...kill her'
'no'
'why'
'b/c shes your gf.'
'hold on...'
'kay'
'im back. i killed her'
'im single again'
'kay...well, im stealing you from her'
'so im not single anymore?'
'nope. =]'
'cool.'
*chanti comes over, i talk to her*
'awww! nessa! i didnt know you && logan go out. he just told me'
'yea. =]'

to

'did you notice we got married before we started goign out?'
'yea'

to

'my mom wants us to go to the movies together...'
'why?'
'idk...im wondering the same'

to

'she dosent want me alone with you in your room'
'umm....? didnt she want us to go to the movies last week?'
'yea. lol'
'oookaaayyy...'

to

'my moms doing the same thing...'
what do you mean?'
'she wants you to come bake something with me'
'kay. ill be there'
[[it was like 9 o clock. lol]]
*being on the side of your house sitting on the steps, looking at the sky*
'wanna have fun?'
'how so...?'
'well...theres a dark spot back there'
'of course'
*garb your hand, we start walking over, your mom calls us*
'so much for that'
*find her*
'where were yall?'
'talking to the neighbor'
'oh'
*you smash the pumpkin everywhere'

to

*isle 17*

to

[[early release day]]
*first kiss*
*my living room, by the christmas tree*

to

*asain store, guy makes us sniff insence*

to

*dollar tree, making you pout everythign back*
'where are you going?'
'no where, can you go over there real quick?'
'why...?'
'just do it...please'
'fine.'
*you buy w/e, we get out of the store && you pull a penguin out of your sleeve, im sad. thought you stole it lol*
'i bought it'
'riiight.'
'i did. ask joey. she say me.'
'yeaa nessa, he did'
'awww. youre sweet'
*another kiss*

to

'i went to the mall today'
'you did? why didnt you tell me?'
'i went for you.'
'oh...'
'i bought you that belt.'
'you did?'
'yea...but its too big.'
*i got back && replace it*


to

*target*
*getting a present for your sister*
'look at the cup!'
*you grab it*
'no!'
'why?'
'you cant buy that!'
'why not?'
'b/c...'
'its for you...'
'thats why you cant'
*you end up buying it, i still have it*

to

*my living room*
'come here...'
'where are we going?'
*you randomly stop*
'OH LOOK! MISTLETOE!'
*my fiest kiss under mistletoe, i lvoe you for it*

to

'i bought you something'
*sadface*
'...'
'what? its for christmas...'
'soooo. you shouldnt have'
'you bought me somethign...'
*piont taken*
'its a giant penguin'
*came w/ too little ones, you left it on my porch*

to

'can you come down town w/ me?'
'no'
'why?'
'idk...'
'ask. please.'
'egh...shell say no'
'she might say yes. just ask please? you can take all the pictures ou want'
'kay'
*took her 10 min to say no*
'i cant...'
'awww. that sucks.'

to

*ravioli party*
*first kiss in the rain*

to

'LOGAN! CAN WE BE PIRTAES!?'
'fine...'
*i spend 85$ in the dollar section*

to

'im making you a message in a bottle'
'make sure its something i cant open for a while'
'kay. will do boss.'

to

*crack candy*

to

*funny pen*

to

*kiss me stickers*

to

'wtfs wromg w/ you?'
'what do you mean?'
'youre acting all fucked up lately'
'hows so'
'youre being nicole-ish...&& not you'
'ill try && be me. ive had stuff on my mind'
'i cant tell you who to be...'
*no response*
'i ve work tomarrow, love you'
*sign off*
*you call me*
'how am i acting differant?'
'i have work tomarrow. talk to you later.'
'...okay.'
*hang up, i feel likse shxt b/c you sounded sad && it made me sad to know i might have hirt you for the first time...*
*next day*
'im sry for being such a bxtch, i didnt mean to. you sounded sad when we got off the phone. talk to me later. love you.'
'i want to know what i did wrong thats all, so i can fix it. i dont want us to ende up like you && matthew. i want us to be together forever. p.s. im sorry i love you'
'dont be'
'i have to be'
*blah blah blah all the mushy jazz. lol*

*night before my birthday*
[[you wanted to miss the cooking competition to be at golden corral, i said no.]]

*my birthday*
you got sick...youre still kinda sick acctually. lol
*couldnt come.*

*we missed the exacct same days of school*
tehe. :]

*sining valentine, chocolate cigars, voodoo doll, candy, airplane, giant card*

*come over to my house that night*
[sry i looked like crap btw]
'i had to gt you something...'
*the prettiest rose anyones ever given me, my favorate letter ever.*

to

today...
ive fallen so hard for you in the last 3 months, youre truely amazing. ive never met someone as wonderful as you. you have no clue what you do to me. logan...i love you. ♥

by xwhisperingxanglex
posted on 02/15/2008

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Comment by virtualbubblewrap: Feb 15, 2008 9:35 pm
wow thats true love...amazing great job Smiley
Comment by quies: Feb 16, 2008 3:26 am
The use of "to" throughout the poem is interesting and moves things along in the beginning, but it's used far too extensively in proportion to the length of the poem and becomes repetitive and unnecessary because you already divide each instance (or set of quotes, rather) by stanza anyway. Also, I'm not exactly sure of the persistent use of "&&" instead of just typing out "and" because from time to time, you'd type a single ampersand rather than a double- of course it's your poem and your style, but it just strikes me as odd, unnecessary, and makes me incredulous at its use. The actual topic of the poem is sweet and can be related to easily, or at least should be- the actual content of the poem draws away from that and takes away from the poem. Because this poem is really nothing but a composition of quotes, with the beginning and ending being an introduction and conclusion, respectively, it singles out the topic as only your experience; someone else with a similar experience (anyone really) would have trouble relating to the poem because a series of quotes or situations rather than an eloquent delve into the experience itself. The topic of the poem is wonderful, honestly. I have nothing against that- but the actual content and quotes makes this poem seem more of a letter addressed to someone (which is why others would have trouble relating to it) than anything else.
Comment by xwhisperingxanglex: Feb 17, 2008 6:31 pm
it actually is a letter to someone...
i guess i should have stated that...
it was origonaly a letter to my boyfriend...
so yea...
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