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She makes me Live

What is this happyness I feel
and why doesn't it seem real
like it will all just end
and this warm feeling will be
nothing but memory

8 months I've been with her
and for 8 months I've lived
I just don't want to die
I want to live with her forever

she helps me breath
she makes me walk
she's why I wake up
she makes me happy

by darksideofme
posted on 06/15/2008

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Comment by AshenNight: Jun 15, 2008 4:17 pm
Glad someone can make you happy.
Comment by darksideofme: Jun 15, 2008 4:27 pm
you did once
Comment by AshenNight: Jun 15, 2008 4:32 pm
Once is so long ago.
Comment by Freewriter91: Jun 21, 2008 12:29 pm
Really glad you found someone who makes you happy
Comment by MysticFog: Jun 16, 2008 12:16 pm
Wow this is really good. I like the line "What is this happyness I feel and why doesn't it seem real" Great poem.
Comment by darksideofme: Jun 15, 2008 4:46 pm
Time can't change what has already happened. You used to make me happy. You could still have today, but you left.
Comment by loveforeverlivelonger: Jun 15, 2008 9:48 pm
good poem!
Comment by loveforeverlivelonger: Jun 15, 2008 9:49 pm
good poem!
Comment by AshenNight: Jun 15, 2008 4:52 pm
Left?
What do you mean?
Comment by ashuhhland: Jun 26, 2008 1:22 am
great poem! idk why all guys cant be like you in person! lol. keep writing though k
Comment by BEAUTIFULPHATMAMA: Jun 29, 2008 7:14 pm
I LOVE IT
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