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Revelation

My dreams have finally come true.
I have what I wanted.
You broke up with her, that other girl, and I have the chance to keep you.
The second I stopped chasing you, you came back to me.
That warm, fluttery feeling has come back, and I'm not depressed anymore.
No longer will I have to see you everyday with another girl.
I finally have the chance to tell you what I really feel, and hopefully you can love me back.
Thank you for realizing what I've been trying to tell you.
Never again will I have to pick up that razor for harm.
You will help me get through this.
You will be my armor, protecting me from all that is bad.

by TiffantAnnLoganAdams
posted on 11/06/2009

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Comment by Loveformusicandpoetry1790: Nov 6, 2009 10:11 am
Aw! this is so sweet and heartwarming, although you are your own person and i know it's hard but you are your own person and you shouldn't have to rely on another to keep you from harm or even so much as self-harm especially.. You are a strong independent women and i know that you don't need another to keep you alive or to keep you from hurting yourself, you control that hun..


Although very sweet and heart warming.. keep it up*smiles*
Comment by stratosgreek: Nov 6, 2009 2:27 pm
Hay. i love all ur rights but not to make you sad. but a guy that leaves one girle 4 another is bad news!
just a heads up

and i love all your writes becouse i see your hart and you are a great person. so dont settle.
kep writing
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