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Polygon

I wish he would leave my kiss on the dance floor.
I'd like to pretend that never happened.

I never asked to be in this shape.
In between you and her;
in the corner being trapped by him.
Next time you let me open my heart
think about this...
Think about my eyes burning with rage and a slight hint of jealousy.
Think about the ways I've made you smile.
Think about how miserable she's made you.
Think about me...
and the way things used to be.
And how repetative I'm being.

I hate walking in circles.
And I hate standing in corners.
Geometry was never my strong suit.

by thefadingscene
posted on 05/13/2008

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Comment by tearsofrain: May 13, 2008 5:47 pm
EWIKNOW
its so not fair to put you in this position.

but i will comment on your actual poem.
when i can.
Comment by TaintedThorn: May 13, 2008 5:48 pm
really great poem...geometry was never really my strong suit eithier...but neitheir was romance...
Comment by babylove: May 14, 2008 12:23 pm
gayyy.... i honestly dont like it... it doesnt flow... im confused.. it dont make any sense
Comment by thefadingscene: May 14, 2008 6:03 pm
it makes sense if you have an imagination.
it has a flow if you know how to read poetry.

unlike yooou i write poetry that has a spark of my own thought. unlike yooou i have an original thought in my head.

so i'm gonna be annoying and show you how i'd write if i had no original thoughts.
"OMGZZZZ I TRIED TO KILL MYSELF
BCUZ YEW MADE ME CRY
BECAUSE I'M UGLY AND STUPID.
I'M GUNA GO CUT MYSELF
AND TAKE A BILLION PILLS.
OR AT LEAST I'LL PRETEND
THEN I'LL TELL YOU ALL ABOUT IT.
BCUZ I'M COOL AND I SUCK AT WRITING POETREEEE"

haha.
k i'm done being annoying.
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