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Only You

Tear drops glisten,
In the rain.
If you listen,
You can hear my pain.
It's not dying out,
Not ever,
Not now.
Your words are clever,
And push away the clouds.
But don't you ever,
Wonder out loud,
"What's it like to die?"
And if you listen closely,
You'll hear my pain,
But mostly,
The person I don't want to be.
The real me,
That only you,
Will be allowed to see.

by squirrelluver2
posted on 05/31/2008

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Comment by childOFtheNIGHT: Jun 1, 2008 6:31 pm
ommg itz suprising that theres not even one comment on this...i think its reallyy good and deserves wayy more coments than just mine

REALLY GOOD! flows really well and ends perfectly

good on ya!
Comment by aqua4ever: Jun 2, 2008 12:13 pm
I like the flow. =]
Im feeling alot of pain right now too i understand what your going through, i think you know that tho from reading my poem, "Pain of a Thousand Years".. I made a newer one thats on the popular list called, "What Sickens Me The Most". Id be kwl if you commented it. =] Thanks, -Aqua.
Comment by asdfyz: Jun 5, 2008 4:10 pm
Your poem is really heartfelt. It is very good. It kinda jsut flows. No need to even try to read it, it jsut kinda flows out when you try to read.
Comment by OverTheRainbow: Jun 8, 2008 5:37 am
That's very good! It really feels like its raining right now Smiley
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