One Good Year

Good job Mike keep writing man dont ever stop

this is really beautiful. she's a lucky girl.

Good song and so from the heart!!! Great job!!!

Very nice.

awesome song mike!

4 one i dont think im superior than anyone cuz that would be a fairytale and fairytales dont really appeal 2 me.... i was not trying 2 insult u or saying u were dumb by any means.. ppl come and go through out your whole life it never stops i never said u hated the ppl of course u loved them other wise u wouldnt be upset thats just common sense on my part i meant more that u despised what they did. my wording sucks at times u took it the wrong way which is my fault. what i meant is if ppl left u and hurt y would leave and hurt other ppl thats just a cycle u dont want to start.. and trust i know whats its like when ppl walk out ur life. no body stays in my life long but thats on them not me i wouldnt leave someone who cared about me unless they did something 2 hurt me not saying u did that ppl r cruel thats life.... please dont think i was personally attacking u im not that way i just hate when ppl do the same thing that they wish didnt happen 2 them sorry if u took my comment offensive i didnt mean it do i just say what i think its a trait of mine i wish would disapear

Aww so sweet.Some people search a life time for that kind of love.Good luck to you both.

I like it.

eh im ify not because of the writing which is good but loving someone is great but dont make it your whole life i did and its been 3 years and i still havent met anybody that will take his place because i did make him my world then and its hard 2 let that go... she is lucky that someone cares for her so much not many girls are that lucky nor r guys lucky enough 2 find a girl they truly care about and not just find sexually attractive i like it because u do have emotion into i dont like it because it sounds like ur setting urself for failure but i do wish u the best of luck with her.

i used 2 put out like 2 poems a week now its like one every 6 months but ur lucky enough 2 write song.. im not very good at that. i still havent figured out what is causing my writers block its not as if plenty of things havent happend 2 inspire writing just dont know how 2 word it anymore what music do u tend 2 lean 2 when u right ur songs?

great poem =]