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Once Dark, now light

Unbound god's creation
I have grown into a sinner
Abandoned innocence
Want an agressive slaughter
They say if you take god's hand
embrace rebirth
but i know it's all a fuckin mockery
i'll never have a grasp on reality
until i saw you
i thought this was nothing more than mind controlling emotions
clouded mind suddenly clear
all my evilness dissapear
death is now avoidable
all because of you
i feel invincible
you're my one and i know
i promise i'll never let you go
i'll do anything to make you smile
because what ever i do for you is always worth while
i guess this is love but who the fuck knows
i'm sick of dealing with all the ho's
your my one and i want it show
i'll take heaven from the sky
just to make sure you know

by KingOfTwilight
posted on 06/02/2008

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Comments: 10
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Comment by SisterofDarkness: Jun 3, 2008 9:25 am
CHRIS OMG WHO IS SHE!!??!!?? youneedtototallyupdatemeonyourlifelikerightnow!!!!
Comment by SisterofDarkness: Jun 3, 2008 9:25 am
btw you never came to visit me!
Comment by bloodyrose: Jun 2, 2008 9:06 am
its sweet...shes lucky
Comment by mysterygrl: Jun 2, 2008 11:56 am
that is a great poem filled with emotion. she is very lucky
Comment by Bourne: Jun 2, 2008 11:59 am
that's so weird, i feel the exact same way and i just posted something exactly like this. well almost exactly.
Comment by aqua4ever: Jun 2, 2008 12:17 pm
This is very sweet, but it would be better without the cussing so for readers i am going to have to Vote down. There are kids on this site.

-Aqua
Comment by MonsterBabies: Jun 2, 2008 2:36 pm
I like it
Another sweet one
Your poems are so fun to read...
Comment by Styrmwolf: Jun 3, 2008 8:06 pm
@Aqua, if we censored everything that offended someone, then we would not have anything left. Parents need to be responsible for their own children, and this site does not have a rule against obscenity, especially if it is used as part of the poem for a reason.
Hah, besides, they've all seen it on cable anyway.

Anyways, I did really enjoy reading this poem and I liked the images you used. She is a lucky girl.
Comment by MonsterBabies: Jun 14, 2008 12:56 pm
Since Someone voted you down...
I'll vote you back up lol
Comment by PrinceofDarkness: Oct 7, 2008 5:44 am
Aqua, Wolfy's right. and funny. You shouln't vote it down just cuz you don't like the language.
Wolf's right about her being a lucky girl, too...
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