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My Love

We are meant
to be you and me
my love for you is like...
honey to the bee
if you open your eyes you will see
my love for you
its completely true
your eyes are like the sea
so big but you can't see
the love inside of me
listen and you will
hear my sobs at night
sitting on my bed
wondering why its wrong when it should be right
and when i asked you out
you said we should just
be friends and you make me...
want to crawl up and die in my bed

by NicholasScott
posted on 02/19/2008

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Comment by BEAUTIFULPHATMAMA: Jul 1, 2008 4:26 pm
Nice poem
Comment by Mangekyo: Feb 19, 2008 12:20 pm
nice.............try to make it seem like its desperation but its love.............. i love it........
Comment by Poison: Feb 19, 2008 12:26 pm
Hmmm its good.
Comment by AnnaChick951: Feb 19, 2008 1:18 pm
Very good.
Comment by Snoman: Feb 19, 2008 8:05 pm
yeah you seem desperate...
and i think you're being a lil beezy bro cause i mean you're in 6th grade.
don't take this personally
you're my brother that's not gonna change
but stop acting like love is something you could know Sticking tongue out
i mean yeah i write about it but that's cause i have a dull imagination Sticking tongue out
what else should i write about!!! i mean it's hard lol Sticking tongue out
but seriously step back
calm down
there's no rush
so just relax Smiley
take it from me Smiley
dating sucks big time Sticking tongue out
Comment by Snoman: Feb 19, 2008 8:07 pm
also after reading this again... it seems to me like Mr. "i'm so sexy" just got turned down!!! lol sorry but i had to rub it in ur face Sticking tongue out
you should just be friends and at least she knows it!!!
sorry...
i'm sorry...
i'm so sorry
i'm sorry...
i'm terribly sorry...
i'm sorry...
so so sorry...
i'm sorry......




I'M NOT SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment by Confuzed21: Feb 19, 2008 8:46 pm
Ohmygosh Man your really good
Whoever made you feel like thats messed up
But I hope it gets better
And you keep writing

[[Confuzed]]
Comment by emogothjen: Feb 20, 2008 8:29 am
umm, yea, it's kool. Smiley
Comment by aCrazyApe: Feb 20, 2008 7:20 pm
this is a very over dramatic poem
Yeah listen to snoman he knows quite a bit about love
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