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My First Time

We look at each other
Saying so much without a word
I was afraid but wasn’t going to let it show
I was asking myself “Am I really ready to let it go”
The look in your eyes let me know that it was whatever I said that would go
You kissed me slowly
I felt a rush of emotions, a tingling throughout my body
This made me want you more
So I opened up to let you know I was ready to explore
I wanted to feel you… More and More
My legs started trembling as I thought about you going inside of me
Then I felt a pain I can not explain
You saw the hurt in my eyes and kissed me softly as to apologize
Then in that instant when you finally made it in, you quickly pulled it out
My mind was racing and I knew I was getting turned out
I knew it was pain but it was an unexplainable pleasure
I couldn’t get enough and I was asking you for more
We went on and it seemed like forever
I was lost with you and you were stroking inside of me
When we finished you held me tight
At that moment I knew I never wanted to let you go
The look in your eyes showed me you felt the same too
We both just laid their shocked and amazed because you were the first I gave my all too…
~KSC~

by MsKeys1707
posted on 04/01/2008

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Comment by bow16: Apr 1, 2008 12:52 pm
WOW...this poem is amazing...I Jus wish my 1st time could have been like that...but mines was something I could never forget...actually my 1st time was stolen from me by a guy that I didn't even know but one of my cousin's best friends...
Comment by kayla: Apr 2, 2008 1:32 am
great poem..the only bit that doesn't sound right to me is..
My legs started trembling and my mind went blank
I was getting more afraid as I thought about you going inside of me.
Sounds like a contradiction, having a blank mind and thinking afraid thoughts.
Quite a journey by the sounds of itSmiley I hope you used protection(sorry thats the mother in me)Smiley.
Great poem!
Love and peaceSmiley
Comment by kayla: Apr 2, 2008 3:00 pm
great new lineSmiley
Comment by MsKeys1707: Apr 3, 2008 4:50 am
thanksSmiley
Comment by drdreya32: Aug 5, 2008 9:51 am
Love this poem i still have my v-card its my weapon. But i'm happy. Good for you and I wish your relationship the best.
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