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Moonlit Ballroom



Sitting alone
I watch
the colours swirl around the room.

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The clock ticks his piercing madness
through the moonlight.
I listen.

The giggles of the lusty dancers
stepping gracefully before me
in and out of rhythm.
The room twists and turns around them.
Lightening cracks above me
falling wistfully on wooden forms,
Lovers play their whimsical games
in the silent abstractions
between the sharp-edged beats.

Desire hangs all about me,
blanketing me in humid rapture,
I am captivated
in the tongue twister.

Awakened by the faint tickle
of warmth whispered into my ear,
A perfectly placed proposal
of “May I have this dance?”
Charmed to my tranquil feet
by a sideways boyish grin;
eyes that shimmer inside me,
searching silently for my soul.
His hand reaches for my heartbeat
in the magic of this moonlit trance,
I place it gently in his palm,
being pulled into the current
of this room’s magnetic tide.
He pulls my gaze into his own.
The clock sings his midnight song.

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by footprints
posted on 10/02/2007

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Comment by kayla: Oct 2, 2007 1:57 am
Excellent poemSmiley Great use of words. Brilliant, vote up!!
Comment by kayla: Oct 2, 2007 2:30 am
very catchy title toSmiley
Comment by missingmom: Oct 2, 2007 6:22 am
I love it!Smiley
Comment by Darryn732: Oct 2, 2007 8:31 am
nice poem, Like It Smiley
Comment by tearsofrain: Oct 2, 2007 4:11 pm
<3 =}
there really is only one response for a poem such as this:
aw.
Comment by sassicat: Oct 3, 2007 11:59 am
Aww really sweet poem!!!
Comment by shyhallow: Oct 3, 2007 8:15 pm
It's amazing how well you wrote this poem, and painted a clear picture with words.

ps-
i like the unique touch, too Smiley
Comment by floating: Oct 5, 2007 4:10 pm
I can see it. Well done! Smiley

Comment by vampireheart: Oct 6, 2007 6:08 am
GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
its awesome!!!

^_______________^
Comment by Syrinx: Oct 10, 2007 10:22 am
I love that! Seriously, that was incredible.

Props!
Comment by moonlightbroken: Oct 18, 2007 8:37 am
i love the end of it, how you made the words go down!!!
Comment by FlyingFree: Oct 22, 2007 4:04 pm
oh my god! You have no idea how much I love that. Is it fiction? Because you've described the situation so well! An excellent read - I love it! Two thumbs up Smiley

<3 Natasha
Comment by DeVdoll343: Oct 23, 2007 8:18 pm
You sucked me in once again,
your word choices, especially
the falling words.. really had a big impact on me!
This poem is beautiful, descriptive.. and truly just paints such an amazing picture. I love this one, almost the best of all of your poems!
Comment by Bourne: Nov 5, 2007 6:22 pm
dev's got a point the words are amazing as usual. really a masterpiece. publishing worthy!
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