Poem of Quotes Members
Please log in below, or sign up.



Forgot Password?
feather
arrow
Subscribe to a premium membership! Premium membership
Search for poetry anywhere! PoemofQuotes SE

Long Time Gone

Lime tree green.
Sunset in May.
Watching the waves.
Counting the days.

Sunset on a plain.
Hold hands in disbeleif.
Immortal happiness.
Life so breif.

Long time gone.
For here is now.
Watch me lover.
I'll find you somehow.

by CallumNorman
posted on 03/03/2009

Vote: Vote upVote down
Comments: 4
Click here to send this poem to a friend

Comment by singlegirl: Mar 4, 2009 1:22 pm
how cute good job i love it Smiley
Comment by kingOVDAwest: Jul 26, 2009 4:43 pm
good poem
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Jul 27, 2009 8:58 am
aww. this is sweet and the picture it painted was clear and beautiful. nice feel to this. good work.
Comment by Uncertain: Oct 18, 2009 3:53 pm
this painted some very sweet images in my head.

made me smile Smiley

I like how you make the lines flow without letting it feel forced.

Add a comment: