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Let me into your heart

why do you let him do this to you,
why don't you see he's not being honest with you,
if i was yours i'd treat you right,
i'd be right there every single night,
i'd be your baby boy, you'd be my girl,
i'd treat you like a queen, you are my entire world,
he's lying the one thing he does best,
why won't you see he's JUST like the rest,
please let me hold you i am the one,
i'd be true to you, for i am your love,
give me your heart take it back from his breaking grip,
and the from the elixer of love you'll forever sip,
please give me your chance,
take another glance,
he's an ass its true,
please let me love you!

by poetoflove
posted on 03/31/2008

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Comment by Waterblaze3234: Mar 31, 2008 7:27 am
i can't help it i love him... and i know he loves me so he's not cheating i told you... he's not! but i love this poem its so beautifluuy written!
Comment by AFireInYourEyes18: Mar 31, 2008 7:32 am
Go for it man... sab needs a real man... so step up!! Smiley
Comment by MsKeys1707: Mar 31, 2008 11:59 am
this is soo sweet
But you have to let her realize that on her own no matter how long it takes
Because I was in a similar situation.. I was so caught up on the wrong dude that i didn't realize the one guy who truly loved me.. So I let him go until I found myself and now I am with the guy who waited for me patiently.. and I am very much in loveSmiley So keep hope strong and if she really wants happiness she will see what she can have with youSmileySmiley
Great Poem and keep writing
Comment by Atwood: Mar 31, 2008 5:40 pm
!!!!!
I KNOW IT.
Dx
WHY IS SHE BLIND?!

..this is a good poem
you hit home for me, clearly.
holy crap.
Comment by Snoman: Apr 2, 2008 9:23 am
It's sad to think that she can't see what seems very apparent to you... Sad face oh well keep you're head up cause i know how she is feeling cause i went through the same thing as her... trust me this guy will keep on cheating, and she'll keep saying he's not and she'll live in her fantasy world built around her own folly and ignorance. but don't worry cause one day she will open her eyes and realize that she's been oblivious to the truth you've been trying to show her... so just don't give up on her yet... and from this poem... i'm sure you won't Smiley
Comment by Danielleybelley: Apr 2, 2008 11:23 am
Ahhh this is really good, but it's true she won't see how wrong he is for her until she's ready. But definitely don't loose hope!! I wish you the best of luck!!
Comment by xmxixsxtxy: Apr 4, 2008 11:11 am
wowza
Comment by poetoflove: Apr 20, 2008 4:58 pm
thanks everyone yea she is my little beautiful broken angel
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